Haiku # 33 .

What  do  you now  see 

   A  night time  lunar  landing 

   Tranquility  Sea .




Inspired by Raul's photo contest ..
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Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Very pretty, sean. Thanks for all your lovely comments today. Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 8:53 AM
good one, you are talented!!
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January 6, 2010 at 1:29 PM
I really like the serenity of this one. I like the opening question--unusual and interesting approach for a haiku. I hope to see more new poetry from you soon. Keep on sharing your talent. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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January 1, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Serenity flows here..Charma
Strand Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 1:09 AM
Munster back onto top,obviously Heineken reaches parts that Magner does not Sean thank for your kind words today.Rgds Brian
Byrne Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 9:44 PM
Top marks!
Delacroix Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 9:35 PM
Nice image in this well written Haiku. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Sometimes I do take on an idea and write several poems around that idea. Thanks again. Caroline.
Strand Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Sean.Rgds Brian
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December 8, 2009 at 8:11 AM
As I said, this one is beautiful. Now, I'm sending a request. Christmas/Hannukah Footles, please! Happy Christmas and/or Hannukah. Lovingly, Dane (soup mail)
Stella Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 8:08 AM
almost like mine lol but yours has colors in it lol great job on this one sean keep on rocking my friend happy holidays
Strand Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Sean,thanks for your always elcome comments and kind words today.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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December 3, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Brilliant write, Sean! I'm sure you'll do well in Raul's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
George   Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 1:27 AM
That's exactly what I saw! Actually I saw the man in the moon. good one Sean. lainie
Strand Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:13 AM
Sean thanks for your kind words & witty observations today.Rgds Brian
Golden Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 9:06 PM
Nice haiku, Sean! Love the second line! Hugs, Donna
Guzzi Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 4:58 PM
awww I want a name. You only have 17 syllables..why not use the title for extra info...."Giant Leap for Mankind" ..although I shouldn't be helping the competition LOL BIG hugs Light & Love
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November 29, 2009 at 2:35 PM
What a peaceful view. Much said in just three lines. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 12:59 PM
Beautiful! Smiling, Dane
Strand Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Yes Sean,the Greens are looking very solid.Hope they don't peak too soon before 2011.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 8:27 AM
Great visual Haiku Sean and much good luck in Raul's contest.. I would not want to be Raul to have to judge as many entries as I have read so far as they are all so wonderful... this is a definite contender for winning ... my entry is Revelation.. happy Sunday filled with luv... blessings .. more luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "sweetheart"
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November 28, 2009 at 7:10 PM
Very Beautiful Sean ... NASA Would Even Be Proud (smile)... Lovely Picture ... MoonBee
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November 28, 2009 at 11:51 AM
nicely put, I thought it looked like the moon was sitting on the ocean, almost floating there.
Brown Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 7:59 AM
Have a beautiful weekend and thank you for posting your awesome poetry here for us to read Sean. Wishing you the best should you enter the contest. Love,Carol
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November 28, 2009 at 4:09 AM
Seems like you're going down memory lane again, Sean, it's been 40 years to be exact since the Apollo moon landing! Hey, mankind has already taken the next giant leap forward...in the direction of Mars this time. Wake up, buddy, you'll miss the flight! Fred
Strand Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 12:29 AM
Best wishes with this on Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today.A chance to become World Champs this weekend ? A Battle of the Hemisphere Kings
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