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Haiku 32 33 34 35 More of Spring

between grassy nests and leafless trees the song of birds return - - - between birds'nests and leafless trees Spring's song - - - a lone woodpecker 's drum on the branch of Spring night serenata - - - between blooming buds and leafless trees a tulip

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... Gigno

Date: 4/15/2013 7:46:00 PM

!!!

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/14/2013 6:44:00 PM

This one i loved it. Becca is right, they seem so easy to write them. Love Terry xoxoxo a 7 >>>>>>>

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/11/2013 7:44:00 AM

They are all lovely, Charma. I think I favor the last one.....Caleb

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2013 9:11:00 AM

Good morning Charma, a beautiful song they sin. I love every praising haiku. especially the one with the tulip in between the blooming world.. enjoyed~Linda

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/10/2013 8:09:00 AM

They're ALL nice this time! I can't decide! :) Ah, the power of Spring. Beautiful work!

Opondi Ougo

Date: 4/10/2013 4:39:00 AM

Beautiful,write...the "or" in it creates a strong suspense that holds attention..like a good appetizer...and when the final meal comes in the end..it is worth the wait...i love it Charm,thank you :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2013 4:00:00 AM

- Thanks for the beautiful "bouquet"! - Number 33 is my fav. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)