Haiku 32

heavy summer rain,
owing his son thousands -
Monopoly money

childhoodrainhaiku

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Paul Callus

May 1, 2020 at 4:34 PM

Where I come from farmers are not pleased with summer rain...it's like monopoly money - not worth anything! Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

May 3, 2020 at 12:28 PM

Interesting! I can't imagine why that would be a bad thing for farmers ... rain for the crops and all that (maybe over-watering is bad just like under-watering is?).

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2013 at 12:17 AM

awww, this is SO SWEET and GOOD ONE

Timothy Hicks

May 25, 2013 at 9:24 AM

Thanks Andrea... you've read quite a lot of my haiku!

Manel Gunatillake

May 24, 2013 at 10:28 PM

7 a must. fantastic. " the best line is Monopoly money. Yes it does. Thank you for you comments on my poems. Look at MY first ABC. True critic always come from you. I appreciate Manel

Timothy Hicks

May 24, 2013 at 10:57 PM

I'm glad you appreciate my comments (and thanks for the high rating... it means a lot). Whenever I read someone else's work by main concern is honesty and encouragement...