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Haiku # 32 .

Illumination ...

  Seeing  the  wood  from  the  trees .

  Caught  in  the  spotlight .



Inspired by Raul's picture ..

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Andrea Dietrich

April 2, 2010 at 9:45 AM

Hey, this is pretty cool, Sean. Sorry I never saw it before. thanks for reading my poem. LUv, Andrea

Moonbee Canady

November 28, 2009 at 7:12 PM

Nice ... Puts me in the mind of a Deer or those chimpmunks of Geico (smile)... Seriously, Good Write ... MoonBee

Doris Culverhouse

November 24, 2009 at 5:22 PM

enjoyed reading today!!

Charmaine Chircop

November 24, 2009 at 2:21 PM

excellent Haiku..Charma

Elaine George

November 20, 2009 at 7:52 PM

AWESOME! A winner for sure, Sean. Lainie

Brian Strand

November 20, 2009 at 12:10 AM

As Henri was ,and will be Sean.Sadly the only justice in any sport is on the scoresheet although football could take many a leaf from Rugby's book in the use of TV replays for major decisions/citing etc etc.Best wishes with this one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

November 19, 2009 at 12:15 PM

Creative perspective on the picture. I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 19, 2009 at 11:15 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Sean. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock

November 19, 2009 at 9:19 AM

Sounds more like hunting to me. Anyway a great Haiku as always. God Bless Phyl

Robert A. Dufresne

November 19, 2009 at 4:44 AM

Hi Sean -just happened on your poem and am only now learning about haiku. It seems to me that yours is perfect in concept form and muse. I really like it. Thanks for the lesson! Robert

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