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Haiku 2a

coastal wind warning tapping out threats in Morse-code on my window sills

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/9/2017 8:39:00 AM

Great haiku!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2016 9:33:00 AM

Another great haiku, Scott, makes me want to write one! Hugs

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/6/2016 8:37:00 AM

I had never thought of those taps of rain, hail and pellet snow as a kind of code. You have written well about all the dots and dashes, and as well, what lies between.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2016 5:37:00 PM

well, I think I am caught up, but again, I think this is one of your very best.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/16/2016 7:41:00 AM

What a lovely picture! Excellent dear, Scott!

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/15/2016 5:23:00 PM

You paint a picture with words that bring your experiences alive in the reader's mind. Good work! Emile.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/7/2016 8:18:00 PM

I can hear them tapping now... Such a great poem, Scott! Very creative and well written!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2016 6:23:00 PM

great haiku, Scott. It truly is.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 PM

Scott, this haiku is superb and very creative! #7

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 8:02:00 AM

Scott, I like the imagery, especially the use of Morse-Code.. clever my friend. LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2016 7:41:00 AM

- This is really powerful, first class haiku Scott !!! (7) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/6/2016 5:42:00 AM

Another beauty, dear Scott!