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Scott Thirtyseven

Haiku 2a

coastal wind warning
tapping out threats in Morse-code
on my window sills

Copyright © Scott Thirtyseven | Year Posted 2016

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November 9, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Great haiku!

June 14, 2016 at 9:33 AM

Another great haiku, Scott, makes me want to write one! Hugs

May 6, 2016 at 8:37 AM

I had never thought of those taps of rain, hail and pellet snow as a kind of code. You have written well about all the dots and dashes, and as well, what lies between.

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2016 at 5:37 PM

well, I think I am caught up, but again, I think this is one of your very best.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 16, 2016 at 7:41 AM

What a lovely picture! Excellent dear, Scott!

February 15, 2016 at 5:23 PM

You paint a picture with words that bring your experiences alive in the reader's mind. Good work! Emile.

February 7, 2016 at 8:18 PM

I can hear them tapping now... Such a great poem, Scott! Very creative and well written!

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2016 at 6:23 PM

great haiku, Scott. It truly is.

Connie Marcum Wong

February 6, 2016 at 7:22 PM

Scott, this haiku is superb and very creative! #7

Poet Destroyer A

February 6, 2016 at 8:02 AM

Scott, I like the imagery, especially the use of Morse-Code.. clever my friend. LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 6, 2016 at 7:41 AM

- This is really powerful, first class haiku Scott !!! (7) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 5:42 AM

Another beauty, dear Scott!

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