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Haiku 2


dry brown cracking fields
at noon south wind touch cloud peaks 
fresh start adventure

(c) Olive Eloisa
2:32pm
July 24, 2014

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Debbie Duncan

January 7, 2015 at 2:50 AM

nice win ;)

Marvin G. Celestial

August 13, 2014 at 11:36 AM

Great one!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 8:23 AM

Love ur haiku dear, n love the fresh start adventure, congrats on fine win dear Olive!

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 10:08 PM

Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Eloisa

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 8:06 PM

It's good to see you on this list today. Congrats, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 10, 2014 at 1:53 PM

Thanks much Andie,.:)

Jan Allison

August 8, 2014 at 6:48 PM

very beautiful haiku Olive congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 7:45 PM

Thanks much Jan ..:) GBU

Poet Destroyer A

July 31, 2014 at 12:33 AM

anytime...PD

Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 7:07 PM

Olive, love the fresh start feeling..Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 30, 2014 at 6:07 PM

Thank you Lolli Linda..:)

James Fraser

July 26, 2014 at 2:56 PM

And soon the droplets of nature, will grace her wonderful grounds. Within days her greens will bloom, and her greenery abounds <*> Fine Haiku Olive, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 30, 2014 at 5:37 PM

Thanks you so much James..:D