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dry brown cracking fields at noon south wind touch cloud peaks fresh start adventure (c) Olive Eloisa 2:32pm July 24, 2014

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Date: 1/7/2015 2:50:00 AM
nice win ;)
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:36:00 AM
Great one!
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Date: 8/11/2014 8:23:00 AM
Love ur haiku dear, n love the fresh start adventure, congrats on fine win dear Olive!
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:08:00 PM
Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Eloisa
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:06:00 PM
It's good to see you on this list today. Congrats, Olive.
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Date: 8/10/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thanks much Andie,.:)
Date: 8/8/2014 6:48:00 PM
very beautiful haiku Olive congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:45:00 PM
Thanks much Jan ..:) GBU
Date: 7/31/2014 12:33:00 AM
anytime...PD
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Date: 7/29/2014 7:07:00 PM
Olive, love the fresh start feeling..Linda
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Date: 7/30/2014 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Lolli Linda..:)
Date: 7/26/2014 2:56:00 PM
And soon the droplets of nature, will grace her wonderful grounds. Within days her greens will bloom, and her greenery abounds <*> Fine Haiku Olive, James :)
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Date: 7/30/2014 5:37:00 PM
Thanks you so much James..:D
Date: 7/26/2014 1:10:00 PM
very beautiful. If you say winds, it will agree with the verb touch!
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Date: 7/30/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea..:) God bless you..:)
Date: 7/24/2014 5:37:00 PM
This haiku is the first step to a new journey. May it be a pleasant one that ends in total satisfaction. Best of luck to you Olive_eloi!:) // paul
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Date: 7/30/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul..:) I hope too I am praying for it to be a success..:)
Date: 7/24/2014 11:40:00 AM
Lovely haiku Olive! God bless you dear!
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Date: 7/30/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Dr. Upma..:)
Date: 7/24/2014 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful, Olive...every day should be a "fresh start adventure" Hope you are doing well, my friend.
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Date: 7/30/2014 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Fate for the generous comment..:)
Date: 7/24/2014 7:57:00 AM
Nicely constructed sweet Olive!
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Date: 7/27/2014 4:48:00 AM
Thanks so much sweet Dave..:) GBU