Haiku 2

Evening zephyr floats Caressing closed eyelids of- Resting gardenia. Words used from Group 2

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Date: 9/8/2023 10:35:00 AM

So lovely! So tender! So romantic. You have created a beautiful scene with sight, scent and touch. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 9/8/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sam!

Date: 8/11/2023 5:12:00 AM

Pretty! Congratulations,

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 8/11/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thank you, Kim :)

Date: 8/10/2023 1:26:00 PM

Ah, beautiful. fragrant gardenia. Nice write Akankasha! Congratulations! :)

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 8/11/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thank you:)

Date: 8/10/2023 1:20:00 PM

Congratulations on this creative winner in my contest. Way to go. Thanks for your participation. Sara

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 8/11/2023 5:24:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! Humbled for my placement, thank you.

Date: 8/10/2023 12:59:00 PM

I do love a zephyr :) excellent

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 8/11/2023 5:23:00 AM

Thank you! :)