Timothy Hicks Poet Haiku

Haiku 27

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NOTE: I know I don't typically go artsy-fartsy with my haiku (wax eloquent as Eileen Ghali would call it). But in this case the sky was being too beautiful to NOT go overboard with the descriptions...

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Richard Lamoureux May 14, 2013 at 9:44 AM I like it! Timothy Hicks May 14, 2013 at 2:02 PM Thanks Rick... It's one I really enjoy myself...

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2013 at 2:33 AM - Oh .... just beautiful! - Have a nice day my friend Timothy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Timothy Hicks May 14, 2013 at 2:03 PM You as well! You seem to check up on almost all my haiku... It makes me happy that you're such a fan! :D

Sasha Maharaj May 14, 2013 at 12:57 AM Beautiful :) Timothy Hicks May 14, 2013 at 2:04 AM Appreciate your visit, Sasha... stop by anytime!

Donna Jones May 13, 2013 at 1:45 PM Heavens cottonfield! Awesome!!!!!!!!! This made me take a deep breath! Timothy Hicks May 14, 2013 at 2:03 AM Thank you Donna! I was particularly happy when I thought of the phrase... glad you liked it!

Jack Ellison May 13, 2013 at 8:38 AM BRILLIANT! I'll say it again, BRILLIANT! You continue to amaze me each day! Timothy Hicks May 13, 2013 at 12:41 PM Thank you so much Jack. I know you're not much of a haiku type person, but I'm pleased you enjoy it! :)

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2013 at 7:16 AM Great imagery revealed in your poem, Timothy! You can never wax too eloquent for me. Timothy Hicks May 13, 2013 at 12:40 PM Well you are very eloquent yourself, my friend! :)

Kim Van Breda May 13, 2013 at 6:38 AM I know... what an inspiration the sky and heavens can be-- lovely descriptive used here. You have put me into Haiku thinking mode :) Timothy Hicks May 13, 2013 at 12:40 PM Thanks for stopping by Kim!

Charmaine Chircop May 12, 2013 at 11:57 PM This is very beautiful..Making me visualize the view Timothy...Charma Timothy Hicks May 13, 2013 at 12:39 PM Thank you Charmaine!

Robert Pettit May 12, 2013 at 10:42 PM I'm impressed with this. Good job. Timothy Hicks May 12, 2013 at 10:43 PM Thanks Robert... glad you liked!