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the mountain stream weeps toxicology revealed what have I become? ....for Rick's Contest

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Date: 12/17/2010 7:10:00 PM
What a stirring question you ask here, Jimbo-- this reminds me so much of our own rivers here-- they are literally dying-- scary and sad thoughts-- and thank you for passing by my poems & for the fave :)--will check out WS Merwin's poems :) thanks -- & I know she's a very cool person & I'm sure things will be well between you 2-- I've had my fair share of debris myself, it's part of friendship, but we can rebuild it again and bridge gaps-- remember you both are wonderful persons :)
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Date: 12/17/2010 7:10:00 PM
btw I hope this won :)
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Date: 12/16/2010 12:51:00 PM
You took the contest to a knew level, giving us cause for introspection. The precious water that sustains us has become a victim of man's indifference and greed. Definitely a winner, Jimbo!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:26:00 PM
hmmm good question ;) Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:43:00 AM
Nice entry with equally nice images, Jimbo. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/13/2010 3:32:00 AM
highly unlikely. john
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:19:00 PM
Love this Jimbo,sad that it's true.Good luck with the contest if still on,whatever, it's a winner for me.Love June
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