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Haiku 25

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Haiku 25

shining through darkness
light shimmering on water
reflection of moon
Entry: "Any Poem goes~" contest of P.D. Written by: Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/12/2015 12:09:00 PM
I think this is very uplifting. Love SKAT
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Date: 6/13/2012 4:13:00 AM
nature is so pleasant and beautiful .thank you for sharing a colorful moment from the wide canvas of nature .jk
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:26:00 AM
I really need to learn how to write some Haiku
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Date: 4/19/2012 10:34:00 AM
Wow! Wonderfully snapped with wonderful imagination, loved much and enjoyed. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:18:00 PM
congrats on your super win,dear carol, and more cheers to you for all the recent placements.. having TPS technical problems, awwwh!..:) huggs
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Date: 4/13/2012 5:58:00 AM
Thank you P.D. Thank you to all who commented. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2012 10:04:00 PM
Carol, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:47:00 AM
aweeee.... i like the image here... now go shine your beautiful words,,in my latest poem... yuppp..thank you for your congratulations... my poem needs your reflection... luv~ always* your little PD ** tickle tickle...
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Date: 3/27/2012 5:48:00 AM
A beautiful picture Carol. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/24/2012 5:49:00 PM
I love Haiku, great poem
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Date: 3/20/2012 6:36:00 PM
Perfect haiku...^-^
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:28:00 PM
Beautiful Carol, reminds me of fishing in May....
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:41:00 AM
Beautiful - you capture moonlight in this poem!
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:51:00 PM
Yes, I certainly know that Gail's talking about in her comment, I too can visualize this poem as if I am there! I just love poems about the moon and it's moon light! You have do magnificently with this write here Carol! I really enjoyed this write in all it's splendor! I love your work of art my friend! Great Work!!
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