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Haiku 23: Prayer Life

kneeling I pour out
              father  –   your love I need  . . . 
                   hold me, I shudder 










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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/19/2014 9:32:00 AM

love the humbleness i read inbetween the lines .

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/11/2014 9:08:00 AM

very beautifully painted picture david

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:57:00 PM

Thank-you my friend . . . all the best.

Mama Bear

Date: 11/11/2014 8:38:00 AM

embracing God's love, how wonderful Well done. Blessings Edith

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:58:00 PM

thank-you and may His love embrace you!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/11/2014 1:17:00 AM

Its when we pour out every thought and emotion..In that deep voidness of our soul is. when He comes.Beautiful!Charma

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:48:00 AM

Yes, the emptying of oneself allows the Spirit to fill us with light, love and forgiveness. Thank-you for your words . . . may He always go forward to lead your way.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/10/2014 2:20:00 PM

Moving and well written.

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:49:00 AM

Thank-you for stopping by . . . may you always find love to fill you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 11:41:00 PM

a heartfelt sincere prayer !

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:51:00 AM

Thank-you Andrea . . . from one who knows the solitude of the heart, my appreciated.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/9/2014 6:53:00 PM

I hear the heartfelt longings in your words David. Very precious Haiku.

David Meade
Date: 11/9/2014 9:36:00 PM

Thank-you my dear friend . . love of a father is special.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2014 3:02:00 PM

Very spiritually orientated..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/9/2014 9:37:00 PM

Thank-you Ms. Sara -- loved your poems today -- well, everyday!

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/9/2014 1:58:00 PM

David, This one says so much!! The Lord God is there for all of us in our hour of need. We must ask for his help. Enjoyed this one immensely. Best Always, Gary (Amen!!)

David Meade
Date: 11/9/2014 9:38:00 PM

Thank-you my spiritual friend -- may we always seek his help.