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Haiku 22 Haiku 23 About a Rose Petal

 a pressed petal

between stained pages

his scent still lingers



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a pressed petal

between stained pages

his fading scent

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James Fraser

April 26, 2015 at 2:42 PM

Two wonderful Haiku Charmaine, smiles, James :) :)

Kash Poet

April 6, 2013 at 4:15 PM

FIRST one!!

Jack Jordan

April 6, 2013 at 9:30 AM

Some feel a need to separate these two haiku. However, for me they work as the perfect pair. "Stained" is an interesting word choice for both, given that it can imply a number of conditions. Nice work! Jack

Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2013 at 3:34 PM

I like both a lot, but maybe for haiku form, the second is better?

Painted Hunter

April 1, 2013 at 7:45 AM

Agree with Frank! Awesome!

Carrie Richards

March 30, 2013 at 9:55 AM

Both beautiful, both are so sad, I would like (as Chis mentions).....to know a little more..... there is a story waiting to be told...but to choose, I would pick #1 :)

Isaiah Zerbst

March 30, 2013 at 5:55 AM

I like the first one better, but I suppose everyone has their own opinion. What a thought though! Such power it has to engage the senses!

Russell Sivey

March 29, 2013 at 4:43 PM

I love these Haiku Charmaine, both are exquisitely written! My favorite has to be the last one, I don't know why, it just gives a certain feel! What a spectacular and creative poem, Great Work!!

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