Haiku 22

nighttime hammock -
the warmth of stars
in my puppies eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 2:40 PM
Very comforting and tender write, Timothy.
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 9:52 PM
My dog is very special to me and he always makes sleep more enjoyable.
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 12:23 PM
this is SO CUTE. I just LOVE it, timothy and in my opinion, what a haiku is all about.
Hicks Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 12:20 AM
Awww I'm glad you liked it! Last summer I spent 12 nights in a row, sleeping outside in the hammock... my dog would always sleep me with, while on occasion I'd browse around on my Kindle Fire. Fun times :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:41 AM
A puppie warms any situation. I like your Haiku
Hicks Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 12:19 AM
He's not literally a puppy, but pomeranians remain so small they might as well be. The one I have is really unique for he's solid black.
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