Haiku 21

sliver of time
it was now no longer
foul smell of death
Entry into "Only # 1 Poems..." Contest of: P.D...... Placed 8th Note: I feel so honored to have received the placement below from Brian Strand Entry: Short & Sweet Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 1st Place Winner 02/15/2012

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Date: 3/7/2012 9:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Carol! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thank you . Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carol.
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carol! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:16:00 PM
congrats Carol on an eloquent write and win luv.. top notch poetry ..
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Date: 3/5/2012 4:08:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Carol...Congrats on your placement in PD`s contest....keep flying...
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:15:00 AM
Fantastic piece of literature,Carol.Many many congratulations!Hope you are well
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:42:00 AM
Congrats, Carol. Outstanding. Great job. luv and hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:47:00 AM
wow............congrats...Carol..........intense .... sweet and short................~sashi
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Date: 3/4/2012 7:07:00 PM
Carol,,, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:55:00 AM
short sweet and deep :)
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Date: 2/19/2012 10:11:00 AM
very powerful. congrats~
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:19:00 PM
wow, Carol, It's awesome to see this number one win in Brian's contest. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:50:00 PM
congrats Carol on first place win for this magnificent write luv.. thankxx for so many kind comments and congrats too..
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Date: 2/16/2012 3:42:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/16/2012 2:54:00 PM
congrad's on your big win! light & love
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:55:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:26:00 PM
A powerful haiku, deserving of the 1st place win..........congrats:) Liz
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:40:00 PM
Carol, another awesome poem. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:30:00 PM
A powerful poem, Carol ! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:28:00 PM
Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Way to go...Sara
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Date: 2/15/2012 12:25:00 PM
A very nice expressed Haiku,thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/14/2012 3:07:00 PM
What a statement you have said here Carol! "...no longer, foul smell of death" very powerful line that one is! I love this Haiku tons my friend! Great Work!!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/15/2012 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Gail
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