Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Haiku

Haiku 21

sliver of time
it was now no longer
foul smell of death

Entry into "Only # 1 Poems..."
Contest of: P.D...... Placed 8th


Note: I feel so honored to have received the placement below from Brian Strand
Entry: Short & Sweet Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
1st Place Winner
02/15/2012

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Kim Merryman March 7, 2012 at 9:20 PM Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Carol! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 6:26 AM Thank you . Love, Carol

Bob Quigley March 6, 2012 at 8:29 AM Congratulations on your win Carol.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 5, 2012 at 8:26 PM Congrats on your win, Carol! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 5, 2012 at 8:16 PM congrats Carol on an eloquent write and win luv.. top notch poetry ..

Olusegun Arowolo March 5, 2012 at 4:08 PM Wonderful piece,Carol...Congrats on your placement in PD`s contest....keep flying...

Fabiyas M V March 5, 2012 at 10:15 AM Fantastic piece of literature,Carol.Many many congratulations!Hope you are well

Ralph Taylor March 5, 2012 at 9:42 AM Congrats, Carol. Outstanding. Great job. luv and hugs, Ralph

Sashi Prabhu March 5, 2012 at 7:47 AM wow............congrats...Carol..........intense .... sweet and short................~sashi

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2012 at 7:07 PM Carol,,, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD

Charmaine Chircop February 20, 2012 at 4:55 AM short sweet and deep :)

Sashi Prabhu February 19, 2012 at 10:11 AM very powerful. congrats~

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2012 at 9:19 PM wow, Carol, It's awesome to see this number one win in Brian's contest. Big congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2012 at 9:50 PM congrats Carol on first place win for this magnificent write luv.. thankxx for so many kind comments and congrats too..

Christopher Bunton February 16, 2012 at 3:42 PM Congratulations!

Debbie Guzzi February 16, 2012 at 2:54 PM congrad's on your big win! light & love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 15, 2012 at 9:55 PM Congrats on your first place win! Blessings, Rhonda

Liz Labadie-Reilly February 15, 2012 at 9:26 PM A powerful haiku, deserving of the 1st place win..........congrats:) Liz

Samual Ronthorpe February 15, 2012 at 3:40 PM Carol, another awesome poem. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe

Carrie Richards February 15, 2012 at 1:30 PM A powerful poem, Carol ! Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2012 at 1:28 PM Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Way to go...Sara

Erich Goller February 15, 2012 at 12:25 PM A very nice expressed Haiku,thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Russell Sivey February 14, 2012 at 3:07 PM What a statement you have said here Carol! "...no longer, foul smell of death" very powerful line that one is! I love this Haiku tons my friend! Great Work!! Carol Sunshine Brown February 15, 2012 at 11:53 AM Thank you so much Gail