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Haiku 21

sliver of time it was now no longer foul smell of death Entry into "Only # 1 Poems..." Contest of: P.D...... Placed 8th Note: I feel so honored to have received the placement below from Brian Strand Entry: Short & Sweet Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 1st Place Winner 02/15/2012

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2012 9:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Carol! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 6:26:00 AM

Thank you . Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 3/6/2012 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carol.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 8:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Carol! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2012 8:16:00 PM

congrats Carol on an eloquent write and win luv.. top notch poetry ..

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/5/2012 4:08:00 PM

Wonderful piece,Carol...Congrats on your placement in PD`s contest....keep flying...

Fabiyas M V

Date: 3/5/2012 10:15:00 AM

Fantastic piece of literature,Carol.Many many congratulations!Hope you are well

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2012 9:42:00 AM

Congrats, Carol. Outstanding. Great job. luv and hugs, Ralph

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/5/2012 7:47:00 AM

wow............congrats...Carol..........intense .... sweet and short................~sashi

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2012 7:07:00 PM

Carol,,, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2012 4:55:00 AM

short sweet and deep :)

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 2/19/2012 10:11:00 AM

very powerful. congrats~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 9:19:00 PM

wow, Carol, It's awesome to see this number one win in Brian's contest. Big congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 9:50:00 PM

congrats Carol on first place win for this magnificent write luv.. thankxx for so many kind comments and congrats too..

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/16/2012 3:42:00 PM

Congratulations!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2012 2:54:00 PM

congrad's on your big win! light & love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2012 9:55:00 PM

Congrats on your first place win! Blessings, Rhonda

Liz Labadie-Reilly

Date: 2/15/2012 9:26:00 PM

A powerful haiku, deserving of the 1st place win..........congrats:) Liz

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 3:40:00 PM

Carol, another awesome poem. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/15/2012 1:30:00 PM

A powerful poem, Carol ! Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2012 1:28:00 PM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Way to go...Sara

Erich Goller

Date: 2/15/2012 12:25:00 PM

A very nice expressed Haiku,thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2012 3:07:00 PM

What a statement you have said here Carol! "...no longer, foul smell of death" very powerful line that one is! I love this Haiku tons my friend! Great Work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/15/2012 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Gail