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Haiku 20

tears fell love up and left... another door opened For the contest of *P.D.* ~Your favorite or best HAIKU~ Written by: Carol Brown 5th Place Winner

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 3:47:00 PM

This is a good one, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Leila Mijares

Date: 3/20/2012 10:53:00 PM

Congrats Carol...Leila^_^

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:09:00 AM

Thank you all for your comments and congrats. Have a lovely week. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:04:00 PM

I think this truly is one of your best, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:50:00 PM

congrats Carol on another amazing win for this sensitive Haiku luv.. for PD's contest..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:47:00 PM

congrats Carrie on another amazing win for a wonderfully writtern Haiku luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:09:00 AM

Congrats, Carol. Awesome. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/16/2012 7:04:00 AM

I really like this haiku, great emotion.

Liz Labadie-Reilly

Date: 3/16/2012 4:59:00 AM

Congrats on your placerment in the contest. I really like your haiku...................:) Liz

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:49:00 PM

carol, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/21/2012 11:02:00 PM

What a wonderful piece. I aspire to that economy of words, so well chosen and expressive. - Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 10:22:00 PM

Just stopping BY to give a big HI. Happy Valentine's Day, Carol.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/13/2012 1:35:00 PM

Lovely uplifting haiku, my friend

Jancarl Campi

Date: 2/13/2012 6:56:00 AM

Hi again. Thanks for your note of congrads on my poem "man naked" My muse is honored also. Jancarl

Dalila Agtani

Date: 2/13/2012 12:24:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku poem. Few words that convey a sad as well as a lovely experience. I enjoyed reading this tonight Carol. Thank you for your inspiring thoughts about my poems. Love Dalila

Tim B

Date: 2/12/2012 5:43:00 PM

Right on, when one closes another one... well. Love is eternal and infinite in its supply but it takes a lot of opening doors for some to find the right home. Here is to you being found blessed and loved always Mrs. Carol. Thanks for sharing!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 2:38:00 AM

WOW.. CAROL... A DEEP HAIKU... AND BY THE WAY... I WANT ME POT OF GOLD BACK... HA HA..KIDDING..

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 2/11/2012 2:14:00 PM

Carol-What a nice inspirational poem! Have a fantastic weekend :)

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 2/11/2012 2:18:00 AM

Thank you, Carol, for your constant encouragement. Loved your Haiku. Few words but they speak volumes. Love, Maureen

Jancarl Campi

Date: 2/10/2012 9:27:00 PM

Hi carol! This is a great haiku and brought some memories. I am a premium member and when i went to see what your poem was about it would not let me in. any ideas? hate to bother you, but I can't seem to get any answers. Thanks and bless you, xoox Jancarl

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/10/2012 5:04:00 PM

Very nice,Carol, I love a great haiku. I used your name in a poem I just posted, named. "Posting Comments Acrostic". I hope you don't mind.

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/10/2012 4:33:00 PM

This is sad but lovely Carol , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xxx

Jim Pemberton

Date: 2/10/2012 3:57:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comments Carol! Thank you for the npspiration that you are to fellow soupers as well! Wishing you a very fantastic weekend! God bless!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/10/2012 3:08:00 PM

Oh such a nice haiku ;} nice to see you on my page ,, hope you are well and happy,, ;}

Erich Goller

Date: 2/10/2012 1:32:00 PM

I hope the other door leads to some happiness. Nicely expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich