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Haiku 20

tears fell
love up and left...
another door opened



For the contest of *P.D.*  ~Your favorite or best HAIKU~
Written by: Carol Brown
5th Place Winner

lifelost lovehaiku

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Kim Merryman

March 21, 2012 at 3:47 PM

This is a good one, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Leila Mijares

March 20, 2012 at 10:53 PM

Congrats Carol...Leila^_^

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 6:09 AM

Thank you all for your comments and congrats. Have a lovely week. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2012 at 5:04 PM

I think this truly is one of your best, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 16, 2012 at 8:50 PM

congrats Carol on another amazing win for this sensitive Haiku luv.. for PD's contest..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 16, 2012 at 8:47 PM

congrats Carrie on another amazing win for a wonderfully writtern Haiku luv..

Ralph Taylor

March 16, 2012 at 8:09 AM

Congrats, Carol. Awesome. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie

Joann Grisetti

March 16, 2012 at 7:04 AM

I really like this haiku, great emotion.

Liz Labadie-Reilly

March 16, 2012 at 4:59 AM

Congrats on your placerment in the contest. I really like your haiku...................:) Liz

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2012 at 10:49 PM

carol, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Chuck Novotny

February 21, 2012 at 11:02 PM

What a wonderful piece. I aspire to that economy of words, so well chosen and expressive. - Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

February 13, 2012 at 10:22 PM

Just stopping BY to give a big HI. Happy Valentine's Day, Carol.

Jack Horne

February 13, 2012 at 1:35 PM

Lovely uplifting haiku, my friend

Jancarl Campi

February 13, 2012 at 6:56 AM

Hi again. Thanks for your note of congrads on my poem "man naked" My muse is honored also. Jancarl

Dalila Agtani

February 13, 2012 at 12:24 AM

A beautiful Haiku poem. Few words that convey a sad as well as a lovely experience. I enjoyed reading this tonight Carol. Thank you for your inspiring thoughts about my poems. Love Dalila

Tim B

February 12, 2012 at 5:43 PM

Right on, when one closes another one... well. Love is eternal and infinite in its supply but it takes a lot of opening doors for some to find the right home. Here is to you being found blessed and loved always Mrs. Carol. Thanks for sharing!

Poet Destroyer A

February 12, 2012 at 2:38 AM

WOW.. CAROL... A DEEP HAIKU... AND BY THE WAY... I WANT ME POT OF GOLD BACK... HA HA..KIDDING..

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

February 11, 2012 at 2:14 PM

Carol-What a nice inspirational poem! Have a fantastic weekend :)

Maureen Lefanue

February 11, 2012 at 2:18 AM

Thank you, Carol, for your constant encouragement. Loved your Haiku. Few words but they speak volumes. Love, Maureen

Jancarl Campi

February 10, 2012 at 9:27 PM

Hi carol! This is a great haiku and brought some memories. I am a premium member and when i went to see what your poem was about it would not let me in. any ideas? hate to bother you, but I can't seem to get any answers. Thanks and bless you, xoox Jancarl

Samual Ronthorpe

February 10, 2012 at 5:04 PM

Very nice,Carol, I love a great haiku. I used your name in a poem I just posted, named. "Posting Comments Acrostic". I hope you don't mind.

Deck Fitzgerald

February 10, 2012 at 4:33 PM

This is sad but lovely Carol , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xxx

Jim Pemberton

February 10, 2012 at 3:57 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comments Carol! Thank you for the npspiration that you are to fellow soupers as well! Wishing you a very fantastic weekend! God bless!