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haiku 20

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haiku 20

tears fell
love up and left...
another door opened
For the contest of *P.D.* ~Your favorite or best HAIKU~ Written by: Carol Brown 5th Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/21/2012 3:47:00 PM
This is a good one, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/20/2012 10:53:00 PM
Congrats Carol...Leila^_^
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:09:00 AM
Thank you all for your comments and congrats. Have a lovely week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 5:04:00 PM
I think this truly is one of your best, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:50:00 PM
congrats Carol on another amazing win for this sensitive Haiku luv.. for PD's contest..
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:47:00 PM
congrats Carrie on another amazing win for a wonderfully writtern Haiku luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:09:00 AM
Congrats, Carol. Awesome. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:04:00 AM
I really like this haiku, great emotion.
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Date: 3/16/2012 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on your placerment in the contest. I really like your haiku...................:) Liz
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:49:00 PM
carol, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:02:00 PM
What a wonderful piece. I aspire to that economy of words, so well chosen and expressive. - Chuck
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Date: 2/13/2012 10:22:00 PM
Just stopping BY to give a big HI. Happy Valentine's Day, Carol.
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Date: 2/13/2012 1:35:00 PM
Lovely uplifting haiku, my friend
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Date: 2/13/2012 6:56:00 AM
Hi again. Thanks for your note of congrads on my poem "man naked" My muse is honored also. Jancarl
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Date: 2/13/2012 12:24:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku poem. Few words that convey a sad as well as a lovely experience. I enjoyed reading this tonight Carol. Thank you for your inspiring thoughts about my poems. Love Dalila
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Date: 2/12/2012 5:43:00 PM
Right on, when one closes another one... well. Love is eternal and infinite in its supply but it takes a lot of opening doors for some to find the right home. Here is to you being found blessed and loved always Mrs. Carol. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:38:00 AM
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Date: 2/11/2012 2:14:00 PM
Carol-What a nice inspirational poem! Have a fantastic weekend :)
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Date: 2/11/2012 2:18:00 AM
Thank you, Carol, for your constant encouragement. Loved your Haiku. Few words but they speak volumes. Love, Maureen
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Date: 2/10/2012 9:27:00 PM
Hi carol! This is a great haiku and brought some memories. I am a premium member and when i went to see what your poem was about it would not let me in. any ideas? hate to bother you, but I can't seem to get any answers. Thanks and bless you, xoox Jancarl
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Date: 2/10/2012 5:04:00 PM
Very nice,Carol, I love a great haiku. I used your name in a poem I just posted, named. "Posting Comments Acrostic". I hope you don't mind.
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:33:00 PM
This is sad but lovely Carol , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xxx
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Date: 2/10/2012 3:57:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments Carol! Thank you for the npspiration that you are to fellow soupers as well! Wishing you a very fantastic weekend! God bless!
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Date: 2/10/2012 3:08:00 PM
Oh such a nice haiku ;} nice to see you on my page ,, hope you are well and happy,, ;}
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:32:00 PM
I hope the other door leads to some happiness. Nicely expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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