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Haiku 2020- About His Flower

neighbour's hibiscus
-unfurling in my tea-cup
last yellow petal

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Karen Croft

July 21, 2024 at 2:00 PM

Beautiful haiku

Kim Rodrigues

July 1, 2024 at 1:08 PM

Pretty imagery, Charmaine!

Panagiota Romios

September 1, 2023 at 11:29 AM

Hi Charmaine, A lovely Haiku. Panagiota xx

I Am Anaya

August 7, 2023 at 9:24 PM

I wish for you thousands of yellow petals, lovely haiku with atmosphere, Charmain.

FJ Thomas

January 9, 2023 at 10:14 PM

This is beautiful Charma. It has been so long, I hope you have had nothing but peace on your end!

Paghunda Zahid

July 25, 2022 at 12:27 PM

They will come back soon.... Well penned

James Peranteau

May 22, 2021 at 9:06 PM

I wasn’t going to comment on this write up yours Charmaine because you didn’t use my favorite color Hibiscus! *winks It’s pink voooman! You nailed this Hiaku, it’s not all about syllables, it’s about telling a story Yet getting it done with 17 syllables of course...purrrrfect...much luv, james

Ts Poetry

November 13, 2020 at 9:21 AM

They will bloom again...lovely CC

Paul Callus

November 10, 2020 at 2:29 AM

A truly beautiful haiku, Charm! Looking forward to reading more like these! Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 6, 2020 at 7:13 PM

so lovely, Charma. ? this is how haiku ought to be! (did you mean tea cup?)

Charmaine Chircop

November 6, 2020 at 8:34 PM

Hehe.Thanks Dear Andrea..It had to be tea-cup not tea-cop..silly me.Thanks for pointing it out..LOl..heheh.??

Reza Raza

November 6, 2020 at 10:47 AM

Splendid

James A.

October 26, 2020 at 6:06 AM

I'll think about this one for a while. I picture a sad dreary morning, holding a warm cup and staring out a window. I hope your morning is brighter than your poem.

Charmaine Chircop

November 6, 2020 at 8:35 PM

Thanks for reading James.Stay Safe

Jan Allison

October 26, 2020 at 1:50 AM

a gem of a poem Charma your excellent haiku poems are always a delight to read, into my faves:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

November 6, 2020 at 8:35 PM

Thanks so much sweet Jan.x

Victor Buhagiar

October 25, 2020 at 10:49 PM

I am not too well, Charmaine, but as I woke up this morning, thinking about the soup, I thought of you. You were always a great poet. Pity you stopped. Your haiku is interesting as with mild weather in Malta all hibiscus seem to be in bloom. Hope to see more poems from you. ~~

Charmaine Chircop

November 6, 2020 at 6:09 AM

Hope you will get better Dear friend.I will pray for you.

Alexis Y.

October 25, 2020 at 5:49 PM

Hi Charmaine, You’ve penned a well written haiku with imagery that stands out. I could just picture the flower with one lonely petal! Well done. Have a good evening:-) Alexis