Haiku - 1

As a blooming rose
unveils a Winter's first mask
Her smile enslaves me
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Callus Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:31 AM
A lovely metaphorical poem, Alvin...congrats on this fine win. // paul
Llanos Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Paul.
Walker Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Alvin, a picturesque and memorable Haiku. Congratulations on your winning entry. ~Sonia
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February 7, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Sonia.
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January 13, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your placement, Alvin.
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February 7, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Agnes.
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