Haiku 1

Somewhere over a tree top The sky is awoke Caressed by the clouds at dawn

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/23/2012 3:00:00 PM

Helllooooooo.....(is anyone out there?......echo echo....)....I am patiently awaiting the rest of these awesome haiku. ha ha ha....I must need more caffeine, right?....Hey, hope u had a smashingly great weekend...send me a note when you post the rest of these...I am afraid I will miss them. :) Gwendolen

Corey Brown
Date: 4/26/2012 2:43:00 PM

My apologies. I have been away from all internet lol. I have posted the other 4 of the set though.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/21/2012 4:03:00 PM

unravel the entire set, Corey! Wow,,,this haiku is very sexy! ha ha....wonderful relationship between sky and clouds! All my best to you, Gwendolen

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

Date: 4/21/2012 2:11:00 PM

Nice haiku Corey!

Corey Brown
Date: 4/21/2012 2:18:00 PM

Thank you! I'm releasing them one at a time but I have 10 sets of 5.