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Haiku 18

on summer worn bench sits the old man -- statue with flesh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/11/2013 10:13:00 AM
Thanks all for the awesome comments. It's a great feeling to have fans!
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:45:00 PM
Awesome, Little one! Thank you for taking the time for a "mini" visit and for sharing this with us...hurry back! Annalise
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:53:00 PM
wow, this is pretty darn good, Timothy! great visual. So what kind of western movies do YOU like? my hubbie is crazy for Gunsmoke. I also like the modern westerns, good and violent ones..
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Date: 4/10/2013 12:21:00 PM
OK... so this is haiku. I am new to poetrysoup and poetry styles, but still recognise talent here. Nice format to write in.. simple but descriptive emotive
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Date: 4/10/2013 11:01:00 AM
good haiku timothy, enjoyed ... always..p.d.
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Date: 4/10/2013 9:39:00 AM
Statue with flesh....WOW! What a line! Amazing! Good one, Timothy! Good to have you back!
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Date: 4/10/2013 8:10:00 AM
Wow, I love this! I love haiku because they can evoke a ton of imagery with very few words. You did a great job!
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Date: 4/10/2013 7:33:00 AM
I love this Haiku!
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Date: 4/10/2013 6:18:00 AM
hey, that's me after a couple of spliffs! lol. nice one, Timothy, and thanks for sharing. regards, eph.
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