Haiku 18

on summer worn bench
sits the old man --
statue with flesh

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Timothy Hicks

April 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

Thanks all for the awesome comments. It's a great feeling to have fans!

Audrey Haick

April 10, 2013 at 10:45 PM

Awesome, Little one! Thank you for taking the time for a "mini" visit and for sharing this with us...hurry back! Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2013 at 2:53 PM

wow, this is pretty darn good, Timothy! great visual. So what kind of western movies do YOU like? my hubbie is crazy for Gunsmoke. I also like the modern westerns, good and violent ones..

Kim Van Breda

April 10, 2013 at 12:21 PM

OK... so this is haiku. I am new to poetrysoup and poetry styles, but still recognise talent here. Nice format to write in.. simple but descriptive emotive