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Haiku 18

wind gusts blow hard
tall waves hit the shore line...
houses collapse

11/5/12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 10:20:00 AM

Phyllis, ~ ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 10:17:00 AM

Phyllis, this is sad... well done...Linda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/9/2012 7:21:00 AM

Hi have you been watching our news Phyl, we have lost a lot of houses this year off our coast and in land with the floods too. xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2012 5:02:00 PM

Hi, sweetie, I am going off now and just wanted to stop by and say hello and hope you recover now!!! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 4:36:00 PM

oh, my, I never saw this one yet. Did it not place? Did you catch any of that storm up where you are? I am so bad on geography!!

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/10/2012 7:57:00 AM

You describe in very few words the havoc wreaked by Sandy! Love and hugs, Jack xox

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2012 4:26:00 PM

Great reminder of what the east coast has just been through; and they still wait for help. So sad these disasters Phil. Your ku describes it to perfection! :)

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 11/9/2012 1:13:00 PM

Hey hey Phyllis, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your Haiku, in the hope that you will read my latest Haiku, I liked your Haiku a lot nicely penned. xoxo - Laila :o)