David Meade Poet Haiku

Haiku 17: Fog Noise

fog  -- deep, wet, THICK –  h a n g s

      s-o-l-i-t-u-d-e    abounds -- I 
                                                                 





                                                                                   long to hear your voice





David Meade

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Constance La France March 23, 2015 at 8:42 AM David, beautiful words and love the layout, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in . . .

Charmaine Chircop November 3, 2014 at 3:27 PM Solitude can be a killer Dave.A deep thought penned! David Meade November 3, 2014 at 4:59 PM A starved heart can lead to entropy of our emotions! Thank-you for your visit.

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2014 at 3:23 PM another example of the sounds of silence!! Nice seeing more of you poetry today. David Meade November 3, 2014 at 4:59 PM or "Silence of the Lambs" I am very glad you stopped by!

Sara Kendrick November 3, 2014 at 10:26 AM I get that foggy sometimes..Very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..(I mean mental fog)...Sara David Meade November 3, 2014 at 5:05 PM I usually go back to sleep when it's foggy -- safer that way!

Liam Mcdaid November 3, 2014 at 8:20 AM beautifully crafted piece david David Meade November 3, 2014 at 5:07 PM You are very kind Sir McDaid and I thank-you for your visit. I am a big fan of yours. All the best.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2014 at 12:42 AM Solitude's perfect image! Great, dear David! David Meade November 3, 2014 at 5:07 PM Knowing that we are never alone!! Thank-you my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong November 2, 2014 at 7:12 PM Fog can feel other worldly when immersed in its shroud...disconnected from those we long for. Wonderfully conveyed in your poem David! David Meade November 2, 2014 at 7:46 PM Thank-you Connie, it is always more fun to be "shrouded" in the fog with someone you love.

Gary Bateman November 2, 2014 at 5:45 PM David, I think you captured the solitude reality exceedingly well with image essence of the "thick fog." I enjoyed your Haiku write here very much. A "7" too from me. Cheers, Gary