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Written, May 23, 2025
For the International Contest, Your Choice L
Sponsor, Brian Strand

days dripping muggy the hot sun intense and hot . . . birds hidden in trees a sudden rain storm with winds howling and screaming. . . the g a r d e n now s i g h s

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2025 3:13:00 AM

Creative work that I think is a good contender for the contest. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Way to go. soupmail soon. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2025 11:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely/creative "haiku" write. We need rain here. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..............