Haiku

Sweet rain cleans the air
As vastness stretches before me
Heaven touches earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Callus Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Another beautiful write; you've got haiku fingers :) // paul
Meyer Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Laughing ... Haiku fingers ... love it. Thank you Paul ~J~
Austin Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:38 AM
I can smell the ozone. I'll get around to reading all your poems. So glad I found you, or did you find me? Love, daver
Freeman Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Awesome job a display of your worthy talent Judith. Agape, Moses
Villarosa Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 12:28 AM
Love this haiku, enjoy your big win on this contest. Congratulations! Judith. (^_^) Noel.
Mehta Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Congrats. I love this
Rider Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brians contest! I love this hiaku! It's very springtime and I'm so ready for anything other than SNOW! ~Tru~
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 4:10 PM
I love the image you created with this. the vastness of it! Congratulations on your win. Luv, Andrea
Foster Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:48 PM
congratulations Judith, A lovely haiku...Margaret
White Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Awesome visual- Congrats to you Judith
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:23 AM
Judith, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
Strand Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Judith.Rgds Brian
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 10:00 AM
Heavenly Haiku Judith>>James
Meyer Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:46 AM
Ya, and won too!!
Rider Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Yes, I entered the same contest..LOL
Meyer Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 6:37 PM
Trudy ... Did you see the contest photo I wrote it for?
Rider Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 6:25 PM
I can smell the sweet rain on the breeze...You do Haiku's so wonderfully! Thanks for stopping in and commenting on my feature, goof! LOL Love you~Tru~
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