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Haiku 15 Wind Rain

wind rain -- greet me, your
                     laugh -- quick, bright . . .  tears sorrowful
                                                                             cleansing is your love








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Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2015 1:20:00 PM

Hi David...I'm snooping in your past works:) This is a delightful haiku with a lovely ending. Hope you had a happy Easter! All the best. // paul

David Meade
Date: 4/8/2015 7:47:00 AM

Hi Paul, thank-you for your kind visit. Sorry I have not been on much lately but I wish come visit soon. Easter was a blessings -- good family time. All the very best -- your visit was a joy for me!

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/3/2015 6:13:00 PM

Invigorating lines! Glad to read the laughter of your haiku this early morning, David. Hope you have a great weekend. A blessed Easter! Kim :)

Cynthia Jones

Date: 3/23/2015 2:16:00 PM

David, this is a great Haiku. Well done my friend. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us all. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2014 10:38:00 PM

the last line is such an awesome ending. Love the way you formatted this one.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/1/2014 9:28:00 AM

David, I really like the message of your Haiku here. The Wind and Rain do have the cleansing and spiritual effect (unless they're associated a hurricane, tornado, etc.). Then, the effect is different. I noticed you've written a number of these types of writes. I will have to read more of them!! Please drop by to check out my poetry as well. I've been with PoetrySoup since August 9th this year. Much Luck and Success . . . Cheers, Gary

David Meade
Date: 11/1/2014 11:31:00 AM

Thanks Gary, I look forward to reading your poems. All the best my friend.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/31/2014 8:01:00 PM

David this is a spirtual excellent write, you say so much with so little lines, I throughly enjoyed it, and how you wrote it, awesome work, cheri and thanks for your wonderful comment, cheri

David Meade
Date: 11/1/2014 11:33:00 AM

Nature and creation gives us so many ways to love and be loved.

Jasmine Cruz

Date: 10/31/2014 4:35:00 PM

Lovely Haiku David. Rain is always good. Thanks for showing us your work.

David Meade
Date: 11/1/2014 11:34:00 AM

You are very kind - may you enjoy the rain.

Sports Man

Date: 10/31/2014 3:52:00 PM

Great Haiku David, A little rain doesn't hurt anyone

David Meade
Date: 11/1/2014 11:37:00 AM

A the country western song says, " . . rain is a good thing!" May you always find a warm bed and a frisky woman on cold rainy nights!!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2014 12:35:00 PM

I love this Haiku, you made me think of my oldest granddaughter when she came for a visit from Lake Havasue City Arizona. I guess they get no rain there that when we had a rain shore she stood out in the rain enjoying herself , eve

David Meade
Date: 10/31/2014 12:43:00 PM

That makes me feel very good! I live in Texas and it does not rain often but when it does, it's like an old friend coming to visit. All the best.