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Haiku 15

The fallen roses reverberate old moonlight tales --a damsel weeps

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Charles Henderson

Date: 7/23/2013 10:39:00 PM

Should have been closer to the top my man. Good one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:54:00 PM

lovely one. Congrats on your win.

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 1:27:00 PM

Oh I like it...congratulations

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 12:12:00 PM

Very nice Adeleke!Congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:21:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Adeleke ! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:17:00 PM

Adeleke :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/16/2013 9:35:00 PM

good work, oh, those old tales..sigh. BG

Deb Wilson

Date: 7/16/2013 2:36:00 PM

This is so very lovely in its simplicity...love,Deb

Tara Jennings

Date: 7/16/2013 10:37:00 AM

how charming, romantic, I like it