Haiku 15

The fallen roses
reverberate old moonlight tales
--a damsel weeps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Henderson Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 10:39 PM
Should have been closer to the top my man. Good one.
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:54 PM
lovely one. Congrats on your win.
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Oh I like it...congratulations
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:12 PM
Very nice Adeleke!Congrats on the win.
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:21 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Adeleke ! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 21, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Adeleke :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA
Gorelick Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 9:35 PM
good work, oh, those old tales..sigh. BG
Wilson Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 2:36 PM
This is so very lovely in its simplicity...love,Deb
Jennings Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 10:37 AM
how charming, romantic, I like it
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