Haiku 15

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May 23, 2015 at 2:15 AM
:(
Lamoureux Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 12:43 PM
I can see them curled up together.
Hicks Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Richard... you are such an avid reader as well as an avid writer. Your warm and thoughtful comments brighten my day :)
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 4:36 AM
What a beautiful picture you have penned in this haiku!Love this.
Hicks Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Thanks for your visit Kash! Glad you liked :)
Haick Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 8:26 PM
: ) This is a really precious picture, Timothy...it brings on warm smiles!
Hicks Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 9:08 AM
:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 6:56 PM
this is really nice, and thanks so much for bringing to my attention that fourth stanza of timex poem. I had that old poem in my files, never posted online before, and I was reworking it for the contest and messed up in my revision of it. I will go change it now.
Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 8:00 PM
No problems! Didn't know it was an actual mistake, but I'm glad I could help! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 2:17 PM
- Wise animals! - Well written Timothy. - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Thanks Anne. You follow my haiku like a dog catching a whiff of something... so thank you :)
Manassian Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 10:01 AM
cute! :)
Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 2:25 PM
Exactly the response I was aiming for... :)
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Nice and beautiful!
Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 2:25 PM
Thanks again Funom!
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