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Haiku

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Seen written upon a bathroom stall door...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Well, Sara, this one certainly fits that bill.
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Why, thank you, Jim. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Proxenos Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Very clever Sara - but you are excellent with your haikus. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, Jennifer. Your visits always add a new dimension to my page. Sara
Callus Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 1:19 AM
You have been thinking outside the (ice) box, Sara :) A refrigerated haiku becomes a senryu :) ~ Have a nice day // paul
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Paul, Or it could be a modern haiku. However, I would say it was a senryu. Could you imagine a person in the bathroom stall writing it. LOL..Sara
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 6:59 AM
- Creative, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Adequate shape and makes you think.
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 4:04 AM
Thank you, Victor. I wonder if I was trying to put my short, fat, dumpy shape up there. LOL..Sara
Poet Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Excellent work; enjoyed Sara, innovative and distinct from others.
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Lasaad, Your comments are uplifting. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 3:12 PM
A creative write/picture/shape. "Love It" Enjoy your day writing away..................
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Your enjoy your day made the rest of my day feel wonderful. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 2:32 PM
So cute! :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Why thank you, Kim. I like the smile..Sara
Kiser Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Original and very unique; wonderful piece.
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Thank you, M.L...Your compliment is uplifting. Sara
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