Haiku

funnel cloud and wind
unrelenting rain and flood
a float of the dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:11 AM
such a sad scene we are witnessing more of these natural disasters. hugs jan xx
Doll Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Hi Jan, so true. I hope this will not become the new norm. Thanks for your visit. It's always great to hear from you. Hugs~ Warren
Gentile Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 5:41 AM
A very haunting ending to your haiku of nature's fury! So well done Warren ! Haiku are your specialty! happy Wednesday !!
Doll Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Mike, very glad to hear from you. Glad you liked it and thanks for your comments which are always appreciated~ Warren.
Pandit Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 6:05 AM
The ending line says it all. Much said in just a few words, Warren.
Doll Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Vijay, thanks for your visit and comments~ Warren
Andresen Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 11:58 AM
... they did not survive ... so sad ...well done, Warren - Happy Easter :) - hugs
Doll Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Hi Anne-Lise , It is always good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments and a Happy Easter to you too. Sending warm wishes your way~ Warren
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