Haiku

funnel cloud and wind unrelenting rain and flood a float of the dead

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/25/2023 5:11:00 AM

such a sad scene we are witnessing more of these natural disasters. hugs jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 6/28/2023 6:05:00 AM

Hi Jan, so true. I hope this will not become the new norm. Thanks for your visit. It's always great to hear from you. Hugs~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/10/2023 5:41:00 AM

A very haunting ending to your haiku of nature's fury! So well done Warren ! Haiku are your specialty! happy Wednesday !!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/23/2023 7:13:00 AM

Mike, very glad to hear from you. Glad you liked it and thanks for your comments which are always appreciated~ Warren.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/5/2023 6:05:00 AM

The ending line says it all. Much said in just a few words, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/23/2023 7:08:00 AM

Vijay, thanks for your visit and comments~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/4/2023 11:58:00 AM

... they did not survive ... so sad ...well done, Warren - Happy Easter :) - hugs

Warren Doll
Date: 4/6/2023 7:15:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , It is always good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments and a Happy Easter to you too. Sending warm wishes your way~ Warren