Haiku 1-5-2017

HAIKU 1/5/2017

barriers of stone
bear the wrath of time’s beauty
chiseled countenance


John G. Lawless
1/5/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Promise Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Reminds me of the saying "Its not carved in stone." The "wrath of time's beauty" , an image of either water or wind erosion. Enjoyed. Rainbow.
Vinson Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Erosion - the master sculptor. Right on, John, good stuff.
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January 7, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Hey Doug, thanks for stopping to read and comment. I have come to marvel at the "beauty" that that "Great Sculptor" creates through the natural world.
Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 4:18 PM
rocks awash by nature create new shapes, hopefully not deformed... so well crafted, john.. huggs
Lawless Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Thanks Nette, always nice to hear from you.
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