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Haiku

multicolor leaves
showers of seed whirligigs
bird nests now empty

Copyright © Warren Doll | Year Posted 2022

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August 4, 2023 at 11:42 AM

Soon will be on us again. I hope the foliage is excellent this year. The beauty envelops my body before the cold of winter. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

August 19, 2023 at 5:22 AM

Hi Sara, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren.

January 24, 2023 at 5:44 PM

Dear Warren, your haiku captures the signs of early Fall so wonderfully. Love your last line especially. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

July 4, 2023 at 4:43 PM

Hi Susan, it's great to hear from you. Thanks so much for your comments and visit. All the best~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2023 at 5:53 PM

I really enjoyed this, Warren

January 23, 2023 at 11:48 AM

Hi Andrea, glad that you liked it and thanks for your visit~ Warren.

October 5, 2022 at 9:50 AM

First line and the last line perfectly describe the season that changed. Well crafted haiku, Warren.

October 7, 2022 at 7:50 AM

Vijay, thank you for your comments~ Warren

October 2, 2022 at 7:01 AM

Warren, your seasonal haiku begets thoughts of fall in its beautiful imagery!! Well done! Happy Sunday!

October 2, 2022 at 2:13 PM

Mike, thanks for your positive comments and visit. Happy Sunday to you too.

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