Haiku

multicolor leaves showers of seed whirligigs bird nests now empty

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2023 11:42:00 AM

Soon will be on us again. I hope the foliage is excellent this year. The beauty envelops my body before the cold of winter. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 8/19/2023 5:22:00 AM

Hi Sara, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/24/2023 5:44:00 PM

Dear Warren, your haiku captures the signs of early Fall so wonderfully. Love your last line especially. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 7/4/2023 4:43:00 PM

Hi Susan, it's great to hear from you. Thanks so much for your comments and visit. All the best~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2023 5:53:00 PM

I really enjoyed this, Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 1/23/2023 11:48:00 AM

Hi Andrea, glad that you liked it and thanks for your visit~ Warren.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/5/2022 9:50:00 AM

First line and the last line perfectly describe the season that changed. Well crafted haiku, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/7/2022 7:50:00 AM

Vijay, thank you for your comments~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/2/2022 7:01:00 AM

Warren, your seasonal haiku begets thoughts of fall in its beautiful imagery!! Well done! Happy Sunday!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/2/2022 2:13:00 PM

Mike, thanks for your positive comments and visit. Happy Sunday to you too.