Haiku 13

the sunset bleeds on the city's silhouette-- stars peek out

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Edlynn Nau

Date: 9/13/2015 1:57:00 PM

LOVELY!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/10/2015 12:06:00 AM

great haiku Heather>love>rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2015 6:44:00 PM

just happened to come upon this last post you had made. Where are you, dear Heather. This is a lovely haiku.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/24/2015 8:18:00 PM

'the sunset bleeds' Oh my...The following two lines? Oh my-oh my...

Dave Timperley

Date: 1/24/2015 8:37:00 AM

The blacker the night, the brighter the stars. So short yet says everything. God Bless. D.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 8:53:00 PM

Heather, stopping by to say hi, Hope your Christmas was a blessed one. Linda

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2014 5:27:00 PM

You are good at this form Heather.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2014 10:02:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

David Meade

Date: 10/23/2014 9:53:00 AM

I like the color, imagery -- the ending of the day -- what might the night bring, to wish upon a star, to feel the night air . . . who is watching with me, am I alone to enjoy the beauty and solitude . . . so many questions this poem creates. Well done and thank-you for sharing.