Haiku 13

the sunset bleeds
on the city's silhouette--
stars peek out
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Nau Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 1:57 PM
LOVELY!
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 12:06 AM
great haiku Heather>love>rajat
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 6:44 PM
just happened to come upon this last post you had made. Where are you, dear Heather. This is a lovely haiku.
Ryerson Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:18 PM
'the sunset bleeds' Oh my...The following two lines? Oh my-oh my...
Timperley Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:37 AM
The blacker the night, the brighter the stars. So short yet says everything. God Bless. D.
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December 26, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Heather, stopping by to say hi, Hope your Christmas was a blessed one. Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 5:27 PM
You are good at this form Heather.
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Meade Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 9:53 AM
I like the color, imagery -- the ending of the day -- what might the night bring, to wish upon a star, to feel the night air . . . who is watching with me, am I alone to enjoy the beauty and solitude . . . so many questions this poem creates. Well done and thank-you for sharing.
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