Haiku

on a woodland trail the slow breeze sways a birch branch golden sunbeams wave Written 11/8/20 checked on PS

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/16/2020 1:40:00 PM

A very fine Haiku with a memorable image. Be well. Brian

Belden Raiser
Date: 12/16/2020 7:08:00 PM

Thanks so much, Brian. I appreciate your comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/20/2020 4:28:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Belden Raiser
Date: 11/20/2020 5:15:00 PM

Hi Jan, thank you and thanks for your help with the contest. I am the world's worst with instructions.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2020 3:49:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Bekden :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Belden Raiser
Date: 11/19/2020 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/19/2020 1:49:00 PM

Belden, congratulations on your bronze placement with your lovely haiku, love the last line!

Belden Raiser
Date: 11/19/2020 2:11:00 PM

Hi Tania, this is my first time to be placed in a psoup contest. Very exciting, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2020 1:18:00 PM

lovely imagery:-) a pretty poem:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/11/2020 5:17:00 PM

If the poem is for the contest you need to put the detail sat the bottom and punctuation on line 2 :-)

Belden Raiser
Date: 11/8/2020 1:31:00 PM

Hi Jan, thanks for your comment.