Haiku

on a woodland trail
the slow breeze sways a birch branch 
golden sunbeams wave


Written 11/8/20
checked on PS

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Brian Sambourne

December 16, 2020 at 1:40 PM

A very fine Haiku with a memorable image. Be well. Brian

Belden Raiser

December 16, 2020 at 7:08 PM

Thanks so much, Brian. I appreciate your comments.

Jan Allison

November 20, 2020 at 4:28 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Belden Raiser

November 20, 2020 at 5:15 PM

Hi Jan, thank you and thanks for your help with the contest. I am the world's worst with instructions.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 19, 2020 at 3:49 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Bekden :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Belden Raiser

November 19, 2020 at 4:23 PM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

November 19, 2020 at 1:49 PM

Belden, congratulations on your bronze placement with your lovely haiku, love the last line!

Belden Raiser

November 19, 2020 at 2:11 PM

Hi Tania, this is my first time to be placed in a psoup contest. Very exciting, thank you.

Jan Allison

November 8, 2020 at 1:18 PM

lovely imagery:-) a pretty poem:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

November 11, 2020 at 5:17 PM

If the poem is for the contest you need to put the detail sat the bottom and punctuation on line 2 :-)

Belden Raiser

November 8, 2020 at 1:31 PM

Hi Jan, thanks for your comment.

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