Haiku 12

eating the wife's baked bread
I take advice from the cow nearby
chewing and chewing



NOTE: for those that have read Haiku 11 I have just recently edited it if you wish to check it out.

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/29/2016 8:50:00 PM

Could always just throw it in a blender...bread smoothie anyone? hehee Silly one, Timothy! Love it! ^_ ^ Always, Laura

Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/10/2016 10:34:00 PM

Genius! :O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2013 10:21:00 PM

Hello Timothy, I want to witness this haiku... I picture you chewing like no other... anyways, what advice can a cow give? always~ Linda

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/21/2013 10:24:00 PM

I'm not sure ask the Arabians... after all they do seem to worship them! LOL... maybe the only actual advice is the fact that they really DO chew their food. Your quirky comments are always a pleasure to read my friend!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/21/2013 9:35:00 AM

hahahaha, somehow this is sweet and mean at the same time..

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/21/2013 10:45:00 AM

Sometimes meanness can be endearing... lol.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/21/2013 6:41:00 AM

What a hoot of a haiku, Tim!...I once tried to bake bread and added way too much yeast, thus a monster emerged from my oven...I had to pick up a broom and attempt to beat it back before it swallowed me (I exaggerate, but not much!) - Tim

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/21/2013 9:04:00 AM

Your comment made me laugh! I can't cook worth squat and have never attempted making bread... I think people appreciate more that I don't bake, however!