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Haiku 12

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Haiku 12

a breath of fresh air
words of a poet released
our poetry lives
"Carol Ann Brown 2011"
For: ^Rick Parise "Poetry On Poetry" contest Honorable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/12/2012 9:58:00 AM
I take a deep breath and sigh, whoa, nice to get those words out. Thank you for sharing Carol! Yes, our poetry lives inside up that's for sure. lol God Bless
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:59:00 AM
inside us!!!
Date: 1/11/2012 11:18:00 PM
This one is striking to me. I diGG the vibe it cooks up in my soul!
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Date: 12/24/2011 5:13:00 AM
Very well said Carol Ann. I take out my book and read my 'babys' ,thats how I feel about my work and remember how each of them came to be a poem.kudos on your win. Merry Christmas Anne
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Date: 12/22/2011 2:04:00 PM
And so it does Carol..! also congrats on the placement here ..!
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:14:00 AM
Not comparable.........wonderful Haiku 12. Oh! my God, your insight and Vision both are much stronger. again. Loved it for sharing. bl
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Date: 12/21/2011 6:25:00 PM
very pretty! congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/21/2011 1:41:00 PM
Carol, very nice Haiku, congratulations on you win, and thanks so much for reading my poetry.
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Date: 12/21/2011 4:12:00 AM
Thank you to the poets who took the time to read and comment. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2011 2:49:00 AM
Beautiful haiku.Congrats Carol on your win!
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Date: 12/21/2011 1:54:00 AM
Carol congrats on your win..forever..David
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Date: 12/20/2011 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 9:48:00 PM
This is wonderful, CArol. Congratulations on the HM.
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Date: 12/20/2011 4:13:00 PM
True!
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:22:00 PM
Great poem Carol! You did fantastic here on this write! I'm glad I stopped by and read this poem this afternoon!! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:07:00 PM
Nice:)
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Date: 12/20/2011 12:52:00 PM
Wonderful write.Enjoyed and best wishes for the contest.
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