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Haiku # 12 .

THE  BOSSY  ROBIN 

PERCHED  UPON  THE SPADE  HANDLE  

DEMANDING  DIGGING  .

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Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2010 at 10:20 PM

oh, I like how this word digging can imply two different things! More birds still!!

Robin L. Gass

March 20, 2009 at 3:49 PM

Hey, no fair. I AM NOT BOSSY OR DEMANDING! Take it back, NOW!!! :) (lol) Great imagery in this, Sean! Funny, too, especially if I picture myself sitting on a spade handle, chirpping out orders! Love, QR

November 30, 2008 at 3:36 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one Sean. Thank you for sharing your gift of humor. I especially like the last line--reminds me of a summer vacation. Thank you also for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

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