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Haiku

drying up stream bed
wet cracking sun heated stones
deer lick minerals

Copyright © Warren Doll | Year Posted 2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen

August 12, 2020 at 7:49 AM

- A lovely haiku, Warren :) - Hope everything is fine with you ... I'm fine ... but the virus is flourishing like never before ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

August 15, 2020 at 3:04 PM

Hi Ann-Lise, I hope you remain fine. It's always great to hear from you. Glad you liked the haiku. Sending many hugs your way ~ Warren

July 27, 2020 at 3:24 PM

excellent imagery Warren, hope you are keeping well:-) hugs jan xx

July 28, 2020 at 12:55 PM

Hi Jan, thanks for your positive comments and visit. It's always good hearing from you. Keep well too. ~ Warren

June 17, 2020 at 10:03 PM

Good, descriptive haiku, Warren. Janice

July 6, 2020 at 1:24 PM

Janice, thanks for your positive comment and visit ~Warren

Andrea Dietrich

June 15, 2020 at 3:19 PM

Hi, Warren. I see you enjoy haiku writing as well. I bet the licking the deer do is really good for them!

July 28, 2020 at 12:59 PM

Yes, I do. For the deer a real treat. Thanks and all the best~ Warren

Joseph P. DiMino

June 8, 2020 at 4:24 PM

Sounds like home...Phoenix. I can feel the heat of your words. Today is cool...under 100:)

June 15, 2020 at 9:26 AM

Joe, thanks for your visit and comments. ~ Warren

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