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Haiku 11 - Summer Drunkenness

bottles of champagne
vintage, luxury, fragrant -
summer party night

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2021

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January 26, 2022 at 12:51 AM

Partying without 'ice on the rocks' has become something out of question here too...A beautiful haiku

September 1, 2021 at 3:01 AM

Well, for those who like alcoholic drink I guess that would be nice. I would like some plain lemonade. Thanks for your visit to my page. I appreciate your advice and concern. You might like to go back in there and read what I wrote on my work called "Depleted". Sara

August 31, 2021 at 7:08 AM

A Great Haiku, Victor, vivid imagery, and fine wizardry in the middle line, keep writing Haikus; it's a lot of fun.

Anitha Jayasankar

August 31, 2021 at 2:06 AM

A beautiful Haiku as always Victor... God bless... ~ Ani

August 30, 2021 at 3:22 PM

Mmm... my glass is waiting for those bubbles, lovely haiku Victor, always enjoy a glass of bubbly... thank you xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 30, 2021 at 3:06 AM

- Too long a trip ... for a glass of champagne :) ... lovely haiku, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

August 29, 2021 at 8:01 PM

Wishing for an invitation!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 29, 2021 at 3:40 PM

Your usual awesome imagery creates a vivid summer night party scene here, Victor. Cheers! :)

August 29, 2021 at 10:57 AM

Love the enhancement of the middle line! Cheers!

August 29, 2021 at 10:54 AM

to warm to be outside , but great for the champagne. Great Haiku

Andrea Dietrich

August 29, 2021 at 10:13 AM

I think that sounds fun. I'm not a drinker. But I imagine champagne tastes awesome, as I have had wine now

August 29, 2021 at 9:06 AM

The joys of summer, beautiful Haiku Victor… Hugs, Belle

August 29, 2021 at 9:01 AM

I only have it at weddings, love the bubbles lol. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose

August 29, 2021 at 6:18 AM

Ah, that sounds inviting put out an extra glass for me , :)

August 29, 2021 at 5:35 AM

Party time. Enjoyed the light touch.

August 29, 2021 at 4:18 AM

Tantalising and enticing haiku, Victor:)

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 29, 2021 at 2:56 AM

Sounds lovely, we are all waiting for an invite….Delice

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