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Haiku 11 8 2020

the kidron valley’s crunch of pebbl’d footfall — ascend olive mount 11/8/2020 Brian Strand’s H I - K U contest

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/14/2020 7:20:00 PM

Love how you intertwined a Biblical reference

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2020 5:36:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Peter Dome

Date: 11/12/2020 3:15:00 PM

Wonderful. Hope you won.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2020 4:30:00 AM

No win but thank you, Peter! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/9/2020 3:59:00 PM

'Been there; done that.' That's actually true... So evocative of a bygone era in my life. Thank you very much for the deja vu, Kim. Glorious! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:19:00 AM

Thank you for this comment! God bless you and yours!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/9/2020 5:46:00 AM

Beautifully done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 6:29:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/9/2020 3:21:00 AM

Beautiful :) Love it

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 4:36:00 AM

Thank you, Regina! <3

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/9/2020 12:17:00 AM

Hi Kim, Good content and imagery.This a well written entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2020 9:29:00 PM

Echoes of the Passion f Christ. ~~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Victor!