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haiku 11 8 2020

the kidron valley’s crunch of pebbl’d footfall — ascend olive mount 11/8/2020 Brian Strand’s H I - K U contest

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Date: 11/14/2020 7:20:00 PM
Love how you intertwined a Biblical reference
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2020 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 11/12/2020 3:15:00 PM
Wonderful. Hope you won.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2020 4:30:00 AM
No win but thank you, Peter! :)
Date: 11/9/2020 3:59:00 PM
'Been there; done that.' That's actually true... So evocative of a bygone era in my life. Thank you very much for the deja vu, Kim. Glorious! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:19:00 AM
Thank you for this comment! God bless you and yours!
Date: 11/9/2020 5:46:00 AM
Beautifully done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 11/9/2020 3:21:00 AM
Beautiful :) Love it
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, Regina! <3
Date: 11/9/2020 12:17:00 AM
Hi Kim, Good content and imagery.This a well written entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 4:35:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 11/8/2020 9:29:00 PM
Echoes of the Passion f Christ. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2020 4:35:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!