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haiku 11

white roses
collect diamond dew drops--
a choir sings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/21/2013 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful short poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/14/2013 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful picture, sounds heavenly.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 7:32:00 AM
Now as I read the comments I see your poem resulted in the same reaction with Demeatrios.
Date: 6/13/2013 1:32:00 AM
beautiful
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Date: 6/12/2013 1:14:00 PM
NINJA
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:39:00 AM
beautiful
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:27:00 AM
H E A V E N L Y B E A U T I F U L!
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Date: 6/11/2013 11:19:00 PM
goodness, this is good. Looking down at Eileen's comment, I guess I did not even see it her way at first, but I bet she got it right. Did she? I was thinking at first it was nature and the choir were the insects and birds. Silly me!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/12/2013 2:51:00 PM
but others saw it your way. I just don't always get things as easily!!
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Heather Ober
Date: 6/12/2013 1:46:00 PM
Andrea, to be honest, I hadn't even thought of it that way. It was meant to be a snapshot of a moment at a funeral. That's why I LOVE poetry - everyone has different interepretations and none of them are wrong :)
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Heather Ober
Date: 6/12/2013 1:46:00 PM
*interpretations
Date: 6/11/2013 8:38:00 PM
Oh.....how sad....I know those dew drops well. Beautiful in every way, my dear...you are incredible
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Date: 6/11/2013 8:12:00 AM
Sounds heavenly.
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:37:00 AM
So full of melancholic depth. I expect nothing less from you. This was incredible.
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