Haiku 11

white roses
collect diamond dew drops--
a choir sings

griefhaiku

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Matthew Anish

June 21, 2013 at 10:47 PM

Beautiful short poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2013 at 7:30 AM

Beautiful picture, sounds heavenly.

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2013 at 7:32 AM

Now as I read the comments I see your poem resulted in the same reaction with Demeatrios.

Kirin Lawrence

June 13, 2013 at 1:32 AM

beautiful

Painted Hunter

June 12, 2013 at 1:14 PM

NINJA

Cathy Moore

June 12, 2013 at 4:39 AM

beautiful

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 12, 2013 at 4:27 AM

H E A V E N L Y B E A U T I F U L!

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2013 at 11:19 PM

goodness, this is good. Looking down at Eileen's comment, I guess I did not even see it her way at first, but I bet she got it right. Did she? I was thinking at first it was nature and the choir were the insects and birds. Silly me!!

Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2013 at 2:51 PM

but others saw it your way. I just don't always get things as easily!!

Heather Ober

June 12, 2013 at 1:46 PM

Andrea, to be honest, I hadn't even thought of it that way. It was meant to be a snapshot of a moment at a funeral. That's why I LOVE poetry - everyone has different interepretations and none of them are wrong :)

Heather Ober

June 12, 2013 at 1:46 PM

*interpretations