Haiku 11

white roses collect diamond dew drops-- a choir sings

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Matthew Anish

Date: 6/21/2013 10:47:00 PM

Beautiful short poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2013 7:30:00 AM

Beautiful picture, sounds heavenly.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 7:32:00 AM

Now as I read the comments I see your poem resulted in the same reaction with Demeatrios.

Kirin Lawrence

Date: 6/13/2013 1:32:00 AM

beautiful

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/12/2013 1:14:00 PM

NINJA

Cathy Moore

Date: 6/12/2013 4:39:00 AM

beautiful

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/12/2013 4:27:00 AM

H E A V E N L Y B E A U T I F U L!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2013 11:19:00 PM

goodness, this is good. Looking down at Eileen's comment, I guess I did not even see it her way at first, but I bet she got it right. Did she? I was thinking at first it was nature and the choir were the insects and birds. Silly me!!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/12/2013 2:51:00 PM

but others saw it your way. I just don't always get things as easily!!

Heather Ober
Date: 6/12/2013 1:46:00 PM

Andrea, to be honest, I hadn't even thought of it that way. It was meant to be a snapshot of a moment at a funeral. That's why I LOVE poetry - everyone has different interepretations and none of them are wrong :)

Heather Ober
Date: 6/12/2013 1:46:00 PM

*interpretations

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/11/2013 8:38:00 PM

Oh.....how sad....I know those dew drops well. Beautiful in every way, my dear...you are incredible

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/11/2013 8:12:00 AM

Sounds heavenly.

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/11/2013 7:37:00 AM

So full of melancholic depth. I expect nothing less from you. This was incredible.