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Haiku 11

sweet and persistent
	river of skin across bone
	wrestling in the night

Copyright © Jack Jordan | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2013 at 4:45 PM

excellent imagery within this one.

February 27, 2013 at 5:12 PM

Thanks!

February 19, 2013 at 4:48 PM

Now there is a thought and image to see. Remembered and missed....this is more of a sighhhh moment for self. But I can remember the ahhhh YES moments.

February 19, 2013 at 6:38 PM

Yes... Me too. J

Charmaine Chircop

February 18, 2013 at 6:28 AM

I love this haiku too

February 18, 2013 at 9:45 AM

Thanks again for reading my poems. J

Poet Destroyer A

February 15, 2013 at 8:32 PM

Hello Jack, a very exciting haiku..pd

February 15, 2013 at 9:08 PM

Thanks! I enjoy inventing them. J

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 15, 2013 at 12:41 PM

- Beautiful written, Jack. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

February 15, 2013 at 1:31 PM

Thank you, and a fine weekend for you too. J

February 15, 2013 at 12:22 PM

jack very good...David

February 15, 2013 at 12:27 PM

Thank you. I appreciate the comment. J

February 15, 2013 at 12:06 PM

I like this one Jack... very original

February 15, 2013 at 12:28 PM

Thanks. I enjoy the form. In some ways they seem to write themselves. Perhaps it's the compression of language. J

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