Haiku 11

sweet and persistent river of skin across bone wrestling in the night

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2013 4:45:00 PM

excellent imagery within this one.

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:12:00 PM

Thanks!

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/19/2013 4:48:00 PM

Now there is a thought and image to see. Remembered and missed....this is more of a sighhhh moment for self. But I can remember the ahhhh YES moments.

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/19/2013 6:38:00 PM

Yes... Me too. J

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/18/2013 6:28:00 AM

I love this haiku too

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/18/2013 9:45:00 AM

Thanks again for reading my poems. J

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2013 8:32:00 PM

Hello Jack, a very exciting haiku..pd

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/15/2013 9:08:00 PM

Thanks! I enjoy inventing them. J

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2013 12:41:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Jack. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/15/2013 1:31:00 PM

Thank you, and a fine weekend for you too. J

David Williams

Date: 2/15/2013 12:22:00 PM

jack very good...David

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/15/2013 12:27:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate the comment. J

Donna Jones

Date: 2/15/2013 12:06:00 PM

I like this one Jack... very original

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/15/2013 12:28:00 PM

Thanks. I enjoy the form. In some ways they seem to write themselves. Perhaps it's the compression of language. J