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Haiku 11

sweet and persistent river of skin across bone wrestling in the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 4:45:00 PM
excellent imagery within this one.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:12:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 2/19/2013 4:48:00 PM
Now there is a thought and image to see. Remembered and missed....this is more of a sighhhh moment for self. But I can remember the ahhhh YES moments.
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Date: 2/19/2013 6:38:00 PM
Yes... Me too. J
Date: 2/18/2013 6:28:00 AM
I love this haiku too
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Date: 2/18/2013 9:45:00 AM
Thanks again for reading my poems. J
Date: 2/15/2013 8:32:00 PM
Hello Jack, a very exciting haiku..pd
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Date: 2/15/2013 9:08:00 PM
Thanks! I enjoy inventing them. J
Date: 2/15/2013 12:41:00 PM
- Beautiful written, Jack. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2013 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, and a fine weekend for you too. J
Date: 2/15/2013 12:22:00 PM
jack very good...David
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Date: 2/15/2013 12:27:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate the comment. J
Date: 2/15/2013 12:06:00 PM
I like this one Jack... very original
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Date: 2/15/2013 12:28:00 PM
Thanks. I enjoy the form. In some ways they seem to write themselves. Perhaps it's the compression of language. J