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~haiku #11~

men frozen with awe catching flakes upon their heads awaiting the thaw

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/26/2008 1:46:00 PM
What a creative use of this short form. Living from North Dakota, I can relate to this piece. We've gotten a lot of snow lately, so we could sure use that thaw. Have a wonderful 2009! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 12/24/2008 11:18:00 AM
Good one Colin..Here in Ca we have rain, but snow in the northern part of the state. Winters just started and I want to head south..smile..Merriest of christmases..BG
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Date: 12/24/2008 6:08:00 AM
Nicely done haiku!! We all await the thaw! ~ Carrie
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