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~haiku #11~

men frozen with awe
catching flakes upon their heads
awaiting the thaw

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December 26, 2008 at 1:46 PM

What a creative use of this short form. Living from North Dakota, I can relate to this piece. We've gotten a lot of snow lately, so we could sure use that thaw. Have a wonderful 2009! Keep on writing. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

December 24, 2008 at 11:18 AM

Good one Colin..Here in Ca we have rain, but snow in the northern part of the state. Winters just started and I want to head south..smile..Merriest of christmases..BG