Haiku 115

Haiku 115
		
		
		Ice-crusted maple 
		branches blow against steel gray 
		Oklahoma sky

winterhaiku

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Faruk Ahmed Roni

July 9, 2025 at 3:18 AM

This haiku captures a stark, wintry stillness, evoking both beauty and desolation. Excellent.

Raven Howell

September 14, 2024 at 8:19 AM

Love this haiku. Timeless.

Hilda Greenhough

May 12, 2024 at 4:37 PM

I can see this picture. You described a tree in winter in a way that I can hear the twigs snap. I enjoy this beautiful nature haiku.

Paghunda Zahid

May 2, 2021 at 4:37 PM

Wow... Sounds cool. Beautiful imagery

Skat A

July 10, 2016 at 11:22 PM

JACK,,, LOVE THE HAIKU. SKAT

Timothy Hicks

February 7, 2016 at 8:44 PM

Always love your haiku, Jack. Haven't read one in a long time though! First line is my favorite. There's an easy-going solemnity in the way you write (just hope no one tries climbing any of those slippery branches!).