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the dragonfly lands on a gently swaying reed an egret watching

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2019 7:44:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, Barbara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2019 6:03:00 PM

back with my congrats!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2019 4:08:00 PM

I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 3/4/2019 7:52:00 AM

Nice one, Barbara. Congratulations on your win.. Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2019 4:37:00 AM

- Congratulations Barbara, on your 3rd place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/1/2019 7:01:00 PM

There's some peaceful imagery; also very vibrantly penned.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2019 2:20:00 PM

An extremely visual write; I can just picture the scene. I imagine that the bird has no egrets about watching. :) :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/26/2019 7:04:00 PM

Wonder if that egret is looking for a snack. Nice haiku, Barbara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2019 6:18:00 PM

I really like this image, sweetie.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2019 12:27:00 PM

love the dragonfly - egret contrast , barbara... remarkable 'ku!...huggs

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/25/2019 11:51:00 PM

really beautiful

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 11:49:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Barbara.