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Haiku 10 22 2018

the stars lifted up and the earth — we stand hearkening 10/22/2018

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Date: 10/22/2018 3:22:00 PM
Interesting juxtaposition of vision and hearing. Nice one, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/22/2018 1:48:00 PM
Great line about 'stars lifted up,' like our eyes when we stargaze - nicely done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle, <3 Kim

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