Haiku 10 22 2018

the stars lifted up
and the earth —
we stand hearkening

10/22/2018
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Wolf Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Interesting juxtaposition of vision and hearing. Nice one, Kim! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you!
Faulkner Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Great line about 'stars lifted up,' like our eyes when we stargaze - nicely done!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, Michelle, <3 Kim
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