Haiku 105

Haiku 105
	
	
	ten-thousand lumens
	reset my inner rhythms
	winter’s dusky light 
	
	
	
	
	12.16.2013

winterhaiku

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Richard Lamoureux

February 18, 2014 at 9:35 AM

You are a bright light Jack, shine on!

Donna Jones

December 22, 2013 at 10:33 PM

Let me know how this goes Jack.I don't know what I'd do without the constant glow of fire burning thru the glass door of my wood stove to help me on these short days....I'm iced in right now..you? Very nice haiku

Jack Jordan

December 23, 2013 at 8:20 AM

I'm sending soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2013 at 3:23 PM

love the picture!

Jack Jordan

December 16, 2013 at 5:50 PM

Thanks, Andrea... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 16, 2013 at 2:28 PM

- A beautiful and especially light, Jack - Love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

December 16, 2013 at 8:38 AM

I know about light boxes..sounds like it works for you..enjoyed the read. BG

Jack Jordan

December 16, 2013 at 8:56 AM

This is my first winter with a light box. So far it works okay. I expected more dramatic results, I guess, but any result is fine with me... Jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 16, 2013 at 8:23 AM

Yes, both the interpretations fit in well by the apt images, Jack

Poet Tacito

December 16, 2013 at 8:24 AM

Ah, yes! I'm very familiar with that. That's very kind of you, Jack. :)

Poet Tacito

December 16, 2013 at 7:20 AM

The start of a winter sunset? I hope I was accurate on this. This was damn beautiful either way!

Jack Jordan

December 16, 2013 at 7:43 AM

Actually, It's about a device called a "light box," which helps to relieve the depression of Seasonal Affective Disorder common to gloomy days in winter... I think I like your interpretation better... Jack

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