Haiku 105

Haiku 105 ten-thousand lumens reset my inner rhythms winter’s dusky light 12.16.2013

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/18/2014 9:35:00 AM

You are a bright light Jack, shine on!

Donna Jones

Date: 12/22/2013 10:33:00 PM

Let me know how this goes Jack.I don't know what I'd do without the constant glow of fire burning thru the glass door of my wood stove to help me on these short days....I'm iced in right now..you? Very nice haiku

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/23/2013 8:20:00 AM

I'm sending soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2013 3:23:00 PM

love the picture!

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/16/2013 5:50:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2013 2:28:00 PM

- A beautiful and especially light, Jack - Love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/16/2013 8:38:00 AM

I know about light boxes..sounds like it works for you..enjoyed the read. BG

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/16/2013 8:56:00 AM

This is my first winter with a light box. So far it works okay. I expected more dramatic results, I guess, but any result is fine with me... Jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/16/2013 8:23:00 AM

Yes, both the interpretations fit in well by the apt images, Jack

Poet Tacito
Date: 12/16/2013 8:24:00 AM

Ah, yes! I'm very familiar with that. That's very kind of you, Jack. :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/16/2013 7:20:00 AM

The start of a winter sunset? I hope I was accurate on this. This was damn beautiful either way!

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/16/2013 7:43:00 AM

Actually, It's about a device called a "light box," which helps to relieve the depression of Seasonal Affective Disorder common to gloomy days in winter... I think I like your interpretation better... Jack