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Haiku 105

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Haiku 105

ocean water ripples
sun brings glistening rainbow
peace is found on earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 10/20/2014 7:02:00 PM
Very good poem Carol. I will appreciate more rainbows when I see them.
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Date: 6/5/2012 1:52:00 PM
Pleasure to read the simple beauty here Carol..)
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Date: 5/17/2012 1:21:00 PM
The haiku is peace...lovely.
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:06:00 AM
nice one. The Rainbows are so beautiful because it's God's promise to never flood the earth again, that's what some say anyway....:) Friend, the haiku is one of my favorite forms too, you are very excellent in doing this form. Love ya,Cindy
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Date: 5/12/2012 2:41:00 AM
Sorry I haven't answered your comments but alas I've been sick and please excuse me Ok? You are the best on my list of fav with others like carolyn devonshire your poetry most times strikes a cord with me and I know you have been following me since early times on the soup I truly appreciate your words of kindness even if my poetry is not all that great. God bless
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:52:00 AM
Carol just as good second time around..David
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Date: 5/7/2012 5:02:00 PM
Ahhh, and Noah opened the doors of the ark and the waters diminished! I love to think that's what you were imagining, Carol! Sweet haiku! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:23:00 PM
A beautiful Haiku Carol, thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:12:00 AM
peaceful imagery Carol...nicely done...love..Joseph
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Date: 5/3/2012 8:51:00 PM
Nice Haiku Carol...will have to try that style myself, never did before. Thanks for commenting on my poem and for the love you have shown. Hugs Marci.
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Date: 5/3/2012 5:54:00 PM
A picture perfect, Carol dear. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2012 3:21:00 PM
Yep! That rainbow does have a magic effect. Love, daver
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Date: 5/2/2012 9:50:00 PM
Your are right,but people always miss that.Nicely penned,Carol
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:09:00 PM
you are so right. but give it time and someone will draw up a deed.
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:28:00 PM
Like the images, Carol. Hope you find time for you! Sent you an "oops" soup mail.. Hugs Cyndi
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:02:00 PM
Cool haiku here Carol..!
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:56:00 AM
Carol nice haiku..David
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:12:00 AM
Nice dear poetess.
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Date: 5/2/2012 12:34:00 AM
Hi, Carol. How is it going for you lately? ARe you like me, having a hard time keeping up (read your blog how you were busy) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/1/2012 1:34:00 PM
lovely haiku, carol
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Date: 5/1/2012 11:25:00 AM
nicely done Carol...always...Joseph
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Date: 5/1/2012 11:14:00 AM
You speak of what we all desire..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by with well wishes..SAra
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:41:00 AM
This must really be a scene! Reading this has a soothing effect on me, madame. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 5/1/2012 3:23:00 AM
reminiscent of nature's ingenuity, Caro.much love.~.O.O.
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Date: 4/29/2012 8:06:00 PM
A seraphim clad in shining light, ah, such a calming effect your haiku's have Mrs. Carol. Thanks for sharing!
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