Haiku 105

ocean water ripples sun brings glistening rainbow peace is found on earth

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Trevor Mcleod

Date: 10/20/2014 7:02:00 PM

Very good poem Carol. I will appreciate more rainbows when I see them.

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/5/2012 1:52:00 PM

Pleasure to read the simple beauty here Carol..)

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/17/2012 1:21:00 PM

The haiku is peace...lovely.

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 10:06:00 AM

nice one. The Rainbows are so beautiful because it's God's promise to never flood the earth again, that's what some say anyway....:) Friend, the haiku is one of my favorite forms too, you are very excellent in doing this form. Love ya,Cindy

Robert Ball

Date: 5/12/2012 2:41:00 AM

Sorry I haven't answered your comments but alas I've been sick and please excuse me Ok? You are the best on my list of fav with others like carolyn devonshire your poetry most times strikes a cord with me and I know you have been following me since early times on the soup I truly appreciate your words of kindness even if my poetry is not all that great. God bless

David Williams

Date: 5/9/2012 8:52:00 AM

Carol just as good second time around..David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/7/2012 5:02:00 PM

Ahhh, and Noah opened the doors of the ark and the waters diminished! I love to think that's what you were imagining, Carol! Sweet haiku! Love, Gwendolen

Erich Goller

Date: 5/4/2012 1:23:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku Carol, thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Joseph May

Date: 5/4/2012 6:12:00 AM

peaceful imagery Carol...nicely done...love..Joseph

Marcella Santos

Date: 5/3/2012 8:51:00 PM

Nice Haiku Carol...will have to try that style myself, never did before. Thanks for commenting on my poem and for the love you have shown. Hugs Marci.