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Haiku 105

ocean water ripples
sun brings glistening rainbow
peace is found on earth

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Trevor Mcleod

October 20, 2014 at 7:02 PM

Very good poem Carol. I will appreciate more rainbows when I see them.

Joe Maverick

June 5, 2012 at 1:52 PM

Pleasure to read the simple beauty here Carol..)

Painted Hunter

May 17, 2012 at 1:21 PM

The haiku is peace...lovely.

Cindy Lu

May 15, 2012 at 10:06 AM

nice one. The Rainbows are so beautiful because it's God's promise to never flood the earth again, that's what some say anyway....:) Friend, the haiku is one of my favorite forms too, you are very excellent in doing this form. Love ya,Cindy

Robert Ball

May 12, 2012 at 2:41 AM

Sorry I haven't answered your comments but alas I've been sick and please excuse me Ok? You are the best on my list of fav with others like carolyn devonshire your poetry most times strikes a cord with me and I know you have been following me since early times on the soup I truly appreciate your words of kindness even if my poetry is not all that great. God bless

David Williams

May 9, 2012 at 8:52 AM

Carol just as good second time around..David

Gwendolen Song

May 7, 2012 at 5:02 PM

Ahhh, and Noah opened the doors of the ark and the waters diminished! I love to think that's what you were imagining, Carol! Sweet haiku! Love, Gwendolen

Erich Goller

May 4, 2012 at 1:23 PM

A beautiful Haiku Carol, thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Joseph May

May 4, 2012 at 6:12 AM

peaceful imagery Carol...nicely done...love..Joseph

Marcella Santos

May 3, 2012 at 8:51 PM

Nice Haiku Carol...will have to try that style myself, never did before. Thanks for commenting on my poem and for the love you have shown. Hugs Marci.