Haiku

brush lavender bush experience nasal joy essence of honey 8/21/2018 LATE AUGUST 2018 STANDARD .

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2019 7:10:00 PM

Hello Roy Pett, i love the scent of lavender. For me no other scent would do. have a nce evening my friend.H

Warren Doll

Date: 9/3/2018 8:23:00 AM

Well done haiku. A unique sensory haiku. Well done, Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 9/3/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Warren, your support is really appreciated my friend. :))

Lyric Man

Date: 8/23/2018 12:28:00 AM

Roy, such a perfect olfactory delight!!

Roy Pett
Date: 8/29/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Lyric Man for your very kind comment, lavender is a delight to my olfactory system but other spices such as hyacinth and lilies are unbearable thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/22/2018 5:16:00 PM

Yummy haiku :)

Roy Pett
Date: 8/22/2018 5:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Maureen, you’re right that’s thanks to our wonderful bees, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/21/2018 9:48:00 PM

Oh, I love the sensational sensory imagery, Roy. A beautiful haiku! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Roy Pett
Date: 8/22/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Susan, lavender is such a wonderful plant, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated my dear friend. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2018 3:42:00 PM

Very nice Roy. I like this :)

Roy Pett
Date: 8/21/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi so pleased you liked this, your support is really appreciated my dear friend. :))

Sand Blown

Date: 8/21/2018 7:45:00 AM

felt like becoming a bee...a 'b'ee is actually labelled as such because of it's sound...bzbzbzbz...

Roy Pett
Date: 8/21/2018 8:35:00 AM

Thanks Sand blown, lavender, bees, birds and humans need each other for survival, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/21/2018 7:41:00 AM

Nicely crafted my friend...love & lavender...^WW^

Roy Pett
Date: 8/21/2018 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment ^WW^, I With you on this one, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2018 7:03:00 AM

what a sweet poem Roy I walk in the sensory garden with mum at her care home and lavender is one of her favourites to smell:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 8/21/2018 8:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Jan, lavender is such a versatile plant with an amazing aroma, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))