Haiku

clear night full moon rise
large lost diamond brightly glows
circles of night moths

imagelightmoonhaiku

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Bernard Chan

October 11, 2018 at 7:14 PM

Beautiful haiku, Warren. Much enjoyed.

Warren Doll

October 17, 2018 at 3:37 PM

Thanks very much for your positive comments and visit, Bernard. All the best ~Warren

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

August 24, 2018 at 6:25 PM

Not a pearl? Beautiful shine from a diamond.

Warren Doll

August 25, 2018 at 4:24 PM

Glad you liked it, Leanne. Thanks for your comment and visit.

Winged Warrior

August 13, 2018 at 7:11 PM

A shining haiku, Warren...love & light my friend...^WW^

Warren Doll

August 14, 2018 at 10:21 AM

Hi WW, your light shines bright. Thanks for all of your positive support. Warren :)

Barbara Aquila

August 10, 2018 at 8:48 PM

Tom, Under the full moon, moths gather like a bright diamond...I can see this. Just beautiful!

Warren Doll

August 11, 2018 at 8:29 AM

Hi Barbara, great to hear from you. So glad you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2018 at 6:51 PM

I enjoyed the imagery here.

Warren Doll

August 7, 2018 at 8:59 AM

Hi Andrea, Thanks so much.

Charlie Smith

July 31, 2018 at 10:28 AM

Love the imagery Warren, well done...

Warren Doll

August 2, 2018 at 10:31 AM

Thanks, Charlie. Glad you liked it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 30, 2018 at 6:24 PM

Hello Warren, I just see this scene in your poem. So beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.

Warren Doll

July 31, 2018 at 7:29 AM

Hi Darlene, Thanks for stopping by and I'm glad that you liked my haiku. All the best to you, Warren :)

Harry Horsman

July 30, 2018 at 2:58 PM

A reflecting haiku, love this. Warren.

Warren Doll

July 30, 2018 at 3:06 PM

Glad that you liked it and thanks for your compliment and visit, Harry

Pandita Sietesantos

July 28, 2018 at 7:28 PM

Written like a true master of classical haiku! Well-done with wonderful imagery, Warren. Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll

July 30, 2018 at 8:42 AM

Thank you so much, Pandita. Warm wishes/ Warren :)

Connie Marcum Wong

July 27, 2018 at 12:01 PM

Your imagery is superb in this lovely haiku Warren! : )

Warren Doll

July 30, 2018 at 8:38 AM

Hi Connie, thanks for the compliment. Great to hear from you. / Warren :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 27, 2018 at 12:49 AM

- A beautiful haiku, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

July 30, 2018 at 8:36 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thanks so much and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Sending big hugs your way./ Warren :)

Becca Teagan

July 24, 2018 at 11:46 PM

Nice!

Warren Doll

July 25, 2018 at 12:57 PM

Thanks , Becca, Nice to hear from you.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 24, 2018 at 2:18 PM

A resplendent vision Warren! Lovely haiku! : )

Warren Doll

July 25, 2018 at 12:54 PM

Hi Connie, your compliments are greatly appreciated. All the best. - Warren :)

Nette Onclaud

July 24, 2018 at 1:09 PM

lighting the creative fire, warren...your moon burns bright!...huggs

Warren Doll

July 25, 2018 at 12:50 PM

Thanks so much, nette.

Mike Gentile

July 24, 2018 at 8:11 AM

What a lovely image summoned by your haiku, Warren! I really enjoyed it Happy Tuesday!!

Warren Doll

July 24, 2018 at 8:26 AM

Hi Mike, I'm glad you enjoyed. Happy Tuesday to you too.

Susan Ashley

July 22, 2018 at 10:04 PM

Beautiful and luminous imagery, Warren. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll

July 23, 2018 at 10:32 AM

Thanks for your positive comment and visit. // Warren :-)

Jan Allison

July 22, 2018 at 6:45 PM

beautifully penned Warren:-) hugs jan xx

Warren Doll

July 23, 2018 at 10:30 AM

Hi Jan - great to hear from you. Glad that you liked it. // Warren :-)

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