Haiku

clear night full moon rise
large lost diamond brightly glows
circles of night moths

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Bernard Chan

Date: 10/11/2018 7:14:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Warren. Much enjoyed.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/17/2018 3:37:00 PM

Thanks very much for your positive comments and visit, Bernard. All the best ~Warren

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 8/24/2018 6:25:00 PM

Not a pearl? Beautiful shine from a diamond.

Warren Doll
Date: 8/25/2018 4:24:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Leanne. Thanks for your comment and visit.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/13/2018 7:11:00 PM

A shining haiku, Warren...love & light my friend...^WW^

Warren Doll
Date: 8/14/2018 10:21:00 AM

Hi WW, your light shines bright. Thanks for all of your positive support. Warren :)

Barbara Aquila

Date: 8/10/2018 8:48:00 PM

Tom, Under the full moon, moths gather like a bright diamond...I can see this. Just beautiful!

Warren Doll
Date: 8/11/2018 8:29:00 AM

Hi Barbara, great to hear from you. So glad you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2018 6:51:00 PM

I enjoyed the imagery here.

Warren Doll
Date: 8/7/2018 8:59:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Thanks so much.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/31/2018 10:28:00 AM

Love the imagery Warren, well done...

Warren Doll
Date: 8/2/2018 10:31:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie. Glad you liked it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/30/2018 6:24:00 PM

Hello Warren, I just see this scene in your poem. So beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.

Warren Doll
Date: 7/31/2018 7:29:00 AM

Hi Darlene, Thanks for stopping by and I'm glad that you liked my haiku. All the best to you, Warren :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/30/2018 2:58:00 PM

A reflecting haiku, love this. Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 7/30/2018 3:06:00 PM

Glad that you liked it and thanks for your compliment and visit, Harry

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/28/2018 7:28:00 PM

Written like a true master of classical haiku! Well-done with wonderful imagery, Warren. Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll
Date: 7/30/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thank you so much, Pandita. Warm wishes/ Warren :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2018 12:01:00 PM

Your imagery is superb in this lovely haiku Warren! : )

Warren Doll
Date: 7/30/2018 8:38:00 AM

Hi Connie, thanks for the compliment. Great to hear from you. / Warren :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2018 12:49:00 AM

- A beautiful haiku, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 7/30/2018 8:36:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thanks so much and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Sending big hugs your way./ Warren :)

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/24/2018 11:46:00 PM

Nice!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/25/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thanks , Becca, Nice to hear from you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2018 2:18:00 PM

A resplendent vision Warren! Lovely haiku! : )

Warren Doll
Date: 7/25/2018 12:54:00 PM

Hi Connie, your compliments are greatly appreciated. All the best. - Warren :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/24/2018 1:09:00 PM

lighting the creative fire, warren...your moon burns bright!...huggs

Warren Doll
Date: 7/25/2018 12:50:00 PM

Thanks so much, nette.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/24/2018 8:11:00 AM

What a lovely image summoned by your haiku, Warren! I really enjoyed it Happy Tuesday!!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/24/2018 8:26:00 AM

Hi Mike, I'm glad you enjoyed. Happy Tuesday to you too.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/22/2018 10:04:00 PM

Beautiful and luminous imagery, Warren. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 7/23/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for your positive comment and visit. // Warren :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2018 6:45:00 PM

beautifully penned Warren:-) hugs jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 7/23/2018 10:30:00 AM

Hi Jan - great to hear from you. Glad that you liked it. // Warren :-)

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