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Haiku

 Spring rains provide life
roots reach for water - well fed
mosquitoes breeding

Copyright © Casarah Nance | Year Posted 2018

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Pandita Sietesantos

July 15, 2018 at 10:46 AM

This shows a darker side of Spring - what can happen when we get too much rain:-)! I enjoyed reading this excellently penned, great, witty haiku! It's already a winner! Hugs. Pandita

July 13, 2018 at 12:06 AM

oh this is good! I really hate mosquitos! But I guess are necessary, to feed the bats? lol Nice Haiku!

July 13, 2018 at 6:37 AM

Thanks! You are right, they are critter food, but what a pain they are.

July 12, 2018 at 7:24 PM

Nice!

July 13, 2018 at 6:35 AM

Thanks!

July 11, 2018 at 10:35 PM

A beautiful haiku Casarah, with a superb second line. A compelling write. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

July 12, 2018 at 3:27 PM

Thank you sweetie :)

July 11, 2018 at 7:23 PM

Is there anything good about mosquito's? :) Life. Hmmmm, not all good eh'. :)

July 12, 2018 at 3:27 PM

I have yet to find a reward for them little pest too lol

July 11, 2018 at 9:51 AM

Very true. I liked your spring haiku with its beautiful image.

July 12, 2018 at 3:26 PM

Thank you!

July 11, 2018 at 9:20 AM

Yes, and they always over breed, dont they? Beautiful imagery here; thanks for the great read.

July 12, 2018 at 3:26 PM

Yes they do! Way too much this year, but the flowers are also doing very well. The good and the bad of spring showers.

July 11, 2018 at 8:53 AM

Interesting haiku ... The arrival of the second line is the right turn for the conclusion ... Thank you for liking my Dancing Hall haiku ...

July 12, 2018 at 3:25 PM

Thank you for stopping by as well. Hugs

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