Haiku

countless falling leaves
forest color patchwork quilt
hidden hunting traps

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Becca Teagan

July 28, 2018 at 8:17 AM

Excellent haiku! I like the surprise ending

Warren Doll

July 28, 2018 at 11:46 AM

Hi Becca, thanks for the compliment and I'm glad that you liked the surprise ending.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 19, 2018 at 4:15 PM

This is an awesome haiku with wonderful imagery and symbolism! Love it, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll

July 20, 2018 at 7:02 AM

Pandita, thank you very much for your positive comments, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. // Warren :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2018 at 7:02 PM

Danger lurks among the patchwork quilt. I really like this image

Warren Doll

July 15, 2018 at 3:05 PM

Everything is not always as it appears. I'm glad that you liked it, Andrea

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

June 28, 2018 at 11:20 AM

O yes.I won't take forest at face value...no more.Great A from me for the haiku of such import.Regards>Rajat.

Warren Doll

June 28, 2018 at 2:47 PM

Thank you very much for your positive comments, Rajat. All the best// Warren

Casarah Nance

June 21, 2018 at 7:07 PM

What an unexpected last line. very good what you did with this haiku

Warren Doll

June 23, 2018 at 5:10 PM

Thank you very much, Casarah

Lyric Man

June 20, 2018 at 11:14 PM

Wow, wasn't expecting that.. and the surprise was a total delight (unless of course you're actually a bear in which case it sucks big time)!

Warren Doll

June 21, 2018 at 4:23 PM

Thanks for your positive comments, Lyric Man. I agree about the bear. It could also be a fox or other critter hiding under the leaves ready to pounce on its dinner. They would be hidden hunting traps too. //Warren